Another sad love story

October 10, 2008 9:52pm CST
Can any message be more touching than this? Daniel: I guess we are the left overs in this world. Jasmine: I think so.. All of my friends have boyfriends & we are the only 2 persons left in this world without any special someone in our lives. Daniel: Yup! I don't know what to do. Jasmine: I know! We'll play a game. Daniel: What game? Jasmine: I'll be your girlfriend for 30 days & you will be my boyfriend. Daniel: That's a great plan in fact, I don't have anything to do for the following weeks.. DAY 1: They watched their first movie together & were both touched in the romantic film. DAY 4: They went to the beach & had a picnic... Daniel & Jasmine had their quality time together. DAY 12: Daniel invited Jasmine to a circus and they went to a Horror House.. Jasmine was scared and she tried to touch Daniel's hand but by accident she touched someone else's and they both laughed.. DAY 14: They saw a fortune teller down the road and asked for their future. The fortune teller said: 'My darlings, please don't waste the time of your lives... spend your time together happily.' Then tears flow from the teller's eyes. DAY 20: Jasmine invited Daniel to go to the hill and they saw a meteor... Jasmine mumbled something. DAY 28: They rode on a bus and because of the bumpy road, Jasmine gave her first kiss to Daniel by accident. DAY 29: 11:37 pm Daniel & Jasmine were sitting in the park where they first decided to play this game... Daniel: I'm tired Jasmine... do you want any drinks? I'll buy you one.. I'll just go down the road.. Jasmine: Apple juice would be fine,thanks. Daniel: Wait for me... 20 minutes later... a stranger approached Jasmine. Stranger: Are you a friend of Daniel? Jasmine: Yes, why? What happened? Stranger: A reckless drunken driver ran over Daniel & he is critical in the hospital. 11:57pm The doctor came out from the emergency room & handed out an apple juice & a letter to Jasmine. Doctor: We found this in Daniel's pocket. Jasmine read the letter which says: Jasmine, this past few days, I realized you are really a cute girl & I am falling for you.. your cherished smile, your everything when we played this game.. & before this game ends, I would like you to be my girlfriend for the rest of my life. I love you, Jasmine... Jasmine crumples the paper & shouted.. 'Daniel! I don't want you to die...I love you... Remember that night we saw a meteor? I mumbled something.. I wished that we would be together forever & never end this game. Please don't leave me, Daniel... I love you, you cannot do this to me Then the clock strikes 12 Daniel's heart stop pumping THEN IT WAS THE 30th DAY...
4 responses
• Philippines
11 Oct 08
i've read this story a lot of times but it never fails to make me feel sad about what had happened to the the guy and girl. this story would help other people realize that we should learn to appreciate and see the people around us. we should tell them how we truly feel because we'll never know how the future would possibly be. we should show the people we love that we love them.
11 Oct 08
Oh wow, is it really a true love story? Well, even if it might be just an imagination or fruit of the mind, it really touched my heart and honestly my tears just ran down to my cheeks. Oh my, what a broken heart! I hope Jasmine recovers from it now, it must be difficult for her to move or to forget that game. It's not easy accept the truth losing the person you just learnt to love.
@ashtower (18)
• China
11 Oct 08
Poeple maybe won't see the importance until they lost it. Not a good story,but a good end:live is to experience
@adihindu (1922)
• India
11 Oct 08
Eventhough they were not in the love when the game starts, they may be in love when the game ends. A nice story and can be good, if it was implemented in a full length story. Try to make it a full time story.