Here's a lil poem i wrote....its called A Lonely Road....

@Zerric (72)
India
January 12, 2009 7:48am CST
and yes it is about heartbreak.......its easier for me to write about that than it is for me to write about love....... A lonely road in front of me, A lonely road behind, The scars of love are my identity, But still she's on my mind, A lonely road is traveled alone, Is what is always said, This lonely road will be my home, But still she's in my head, A lonely sky spreads out above, The rain: its way to cry, I cannot stand, what they call love, Why won't this feeling die? I know sometimes that love won't fail, Its happened in the past, But to me Love is just a fairy tale, And Forevers never last,
4 responses
@aisaellis22 (6445)
• United States
20 Jan 09
Hello Zerric! Very well written. I mean, I love how the way you deliver it. But it seems this poem has a negative outlook about love. I hope that the next time you wrote a poem as lovely as this, love wouldn't be very tale anymore.
@Zerric (72)
• India
23 Jan 09
well depends on how love treats me........ if i feel inspired by something i'll write something else.....
• United States
23 Jan 09
ok, that's better..
• United States
7 Feb 09
omg that was pretty gloomy but i luved it =)
@Zerric (72)
• India
17 Mar 09
yay....its my young lil sis.......who deleted me from her friend list.....
• Philippines
12 Jan 09
wow..short but nice poem u got there. did u just had a bad experience in love? reading each lines...it must have been really hard for you, i assume.
• Australia
12 Jan 09
Pretty negative outlook heh.. Nice poem you wrote. It seems to clearly express how you feel