Help to separate the long sentences?
By ktosea
@ktosea (2026)
China
March 19, 2009 9:45pm CST
Hi Mylotters;it's from an agreements,the sentence are as following
Schedule A as written does not really describe what the business arrangements are that the parties will participate in together it is just a listing of entities and their businesses except for the last line of schedule A -should the schedule be revised.
I separate the sentence as below,please take a look and give me an advice if it's proper
Schedule A as written, does not really describe what the business arrangements are that the parties will participate in together, it is just a listing of entities and their businesses except for the last line of schedule A -should the schedule be revised.?
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2 responses
@sysdexlicwriter (1619)
• United States
20 Mar 09
Okay, here goes!
Schedule A, as written, does not really describe what the business arrangements are that the parties will participate in together. It is just a listing of entities and their businesses, except for the last line of schedule A, should the schedule be revised.
How's that?
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@underdogtoo (9579)
• Philippines
20 Mar 09
I have a little trick for making a long sentence short and more readable. It's called a period and it helps me to clarify my mind and make my sentence readable. Cheers!!
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