Elements of a Woman
@additional001 (213)
United States
June 7, 2009 11:40pm CST
Elements of a Woman
She is like the night
cool and mysterious
She is like the day
warm and majestic
She is like the wind
conservative, yet unpredictable
She is like the water
open, yet holding many secrets
She is like the Earth
maternal, yet allowing freedom to grow
She is like the sun
burning with desires that aren't easy quenched
She is like the moon
beautiful and graceful
She is like the universe
holding my very soul in her arms.
3 responses
@additional001 (213)
• United States
10 Jun 09
Poetry like any art is only art when it's shared and enjoyed by many. I'm glad that you like my work as much as you do, it makes sharing worth while when people share their feedback on it. It's nice to know that it effects people in some way.
@additional001 (213)
• United States
8 Jun 09
Thank you for your feedback :) I agree with those sentiments somewhat. :)
@ranikrishnan (1683)
• India
8 Jun 09
wow.. man i can definately say you are so very deeply in love with someone am i right? well women are great as long as men treat them as great... dont you think so..
"She is like the water open, yet holding many secrets
She is like the Earth maternal, yet allowing freedom to grow
She is like the sun burning with desires that aren't easy quenched
She is like the moon beautiful and graceful
She is like the universe holding my very soul in her arms. "
i like these lines very much ..
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@additional001 (213)
• United States
8 Jun 09
Well the poem wasn't so much about being in love with a woman... more in love with all women and how they tend to relate to elemental things around us. Thank you for taking the time to comment. Much appreciated.
