what do you think about this poem?
June 11, 2009 2:53pm CST
THE NIGHT MY HEART DIED Last night, i dropped numb on the floor. My body laid pale, movements were no more. The silence of stillness as the swift wind blows, Clothed the night, with loneliness as it goes.. And as darkness filled that vast empty room, thus triggered a memory which came out of the gloom A memory of two souls that vowed to forever, A memory of a love, pure and stronger than ever... But the memory broke to pieces when lightning cut through... Like the day it all ended, the day I lost you. last night was the night, I couldnt run nor hide... LAst night was the night, This heart of mine died...
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12 Jun 09
How sad. Nice poem. My favorite lines were, And as darkness filled that vast empty room, thus triggered a memory which came out of the gloom. A memory of two souls that vowed to forever... it sounds like a residual haunting of a dark bedroom and when lightening flashes they disappear. I enjoyed the red, thanks for sharing.