The Dream

United States
June 13, 2009 9:15am CST
The Dream I lie awake in the night So empty this feeling isn't right Emptiness deep down in my sould Help me someone I'm loosing control Emptiness in my heart Oh Cupid loan me your magic dart Empty of what I need So real I seem to bleed Love has gone astray Please come back that's all I pray As I drift close to sleep Visions come and I stop to weep I dream of a place far far away where love isn't faded by shadows of gray No one hides behind an actors mask Finding ones love is not a hard task We can walk together to lovers in love We are at peace like the angel's above I can kiss and hold you and make you believe Your love is the only one I want to receive Two silhouettes embracing in the last day's golden light We begin to share our love from dusk on through the night.
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5 responses
• United States
13 Jun 09
Very nice. You should definitely write more.
• United States
13 Jun 09
I actually used to write a lot during my high school years. I stopped after that though. I think I got a little to jaded by life and lost my inspiration. Life has a funny way of stomping the crap out of your dreams... and that can just sap any good sentiments right out of you if you let it. I let it:{
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• United States
13 Jun 09
Well, don't let it anymore. You've got talent.
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@kalaga (547)
• United States
17 Jun 09
very nice ...i come to this part of mylot just to read poetry.thanks for sharing your wonderful poetry here.
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• United States
17 Jun 09
Thank you for taking the time to read and acknowledge it:)
13 Jun 09
Holding me close in the dawn's early light, I whisper to you, please dont say goodnight Soon you will leave as you do in the day, Back to your world, so dismal and grey Stay with me forever in a world with no seams, Full of love and caresses, of hopes and dreams No fighting, no anger, just you and me, A life so eternal in this world so free A world full of love so pure and clean, A world we can share...a life in our dreams.
• United States
13 Jun 09
Nice
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• United States
13 Jun 09
Niiiiice! Kinda a turn on! LOL
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14 Jun 09
! lol !
@lulu1220 (1009)
• United States
18 Jun 09
I read this a few times because I loved it so much. Great job!
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• United States
18 Jun 09
Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it so much.
• United States
31 Mar 10
to me your poetry is like music to my ears. i absolutely love poetry. poetry is so moving and beautiful.