Some thoughts like poetry!
@parthasarathi (446)
India
June 18, 2009 2:52pm CST
I can speak, every word,
that man or god ever created,
I can sing every song,
Any one has ever sang,
But I go dumb when I see you,
I forget everything,
i lose contron,
Everytime, all the time,
I dream of making you mine,
I just don't know how to do it,
To say those words,
It needs words more than magic,
to be worthy enough for you,
everything else seems so worthless!
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@byfaithonly (10698)
• United States
18 Jun 09
been there done that - I remember times in life feeling exactly like the words of this poem. Beautifully put thank you so much for sharing - brings back memories of ones I felt this way about in the past.
@parthasarathi (446)
• India
19 Jun 09
Yea, reminds me of teenage days. Those feelings sometimes really gives you an ache in your heart.Just makes me ask myself, "Can we go back to those days?" "Wish I could have told her how much i felt about her!" Priceless emotions!
@byfaithonly (10698)
• United States
19 Jun 09
Exactly - main one I've been thinking of since reading this is 'Roger' - if only things had been different, if I had told him the whole story back then, if we could meet again... Opps that is out he's happily married, happy for him but sad for me :(
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@parthasarathi (446)
• India
19 Jun 09
Yes! but who knows, may be he is feeling the same right now? OMG, I am feeling so romantically thrilled! Oh God, I love your work!
@eileenleyva (27562)
• Philippines
26 Jun 09
Nice try at poetry. You need to rephrase a little bit and mind the punctuation but the message was received all right. You are in love. Hey, that's wonderful. Nourish that. Doesn't come everyday, so you might as well give it an extra good care.
@parthasarathi (446)
• India
29 Jun 09
Hey, thanks for that nice comment.I will try poetry. And yes, it doen't come everyday.
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