would you be kind enough to help me improve the self-introduction?

China
July 12, 2009 12:34am CST
hey, nice to meet you. the following is my self-introduction which is to be used as my self-introduction to a website. i would like to be an oral english teacher. i wonder how to improve it . thanks for helping. "hi, nice to meet you. it's my great honour to be with you here.i am from jiangsu province. i have taught english for almost ten years, during which i took translator and interpreter as my part-time jobs as well.most of us have imagined being good at english. however, roma was not built in one day. in order to achieve our goals, we need ambition, determination and action. as far as i am concerned, learning english should be a precious experience in our life, which is chanllenging, encouraging and interesting above all.i would like to be your companion in english learning and surely it's my great pleasure. have a nice day!
1 response
@Sir_bobby88 (8231)
• Singapore
12 Jul 09
Well i think that comes to communication guess you will have to go club or somewhere to socialise around to improve it yea .
• China
12 Jul 09
thanks anyway!