Can you write peoms?
By vijayanths
@vijayanths (7877)
India
7 responses
@clutterbug (1051)
• United States
12 Jul 09
Dining Chinese
Friendly greeting,
pleasure meeting,
vinyl seating,
tea is steeping,
menu readiing,
buffet eating,
central heating,
windows weeping,
beeper beping,
time is fleeting.
Hey vijayanths, I'm not really running from the law, I was joking yesterday, lol. Please forgive me.
@vijayanths (7877)
• India
13 Jul 09
Good pretend then. If you keep on pretending like this, one day you will become a famous poet. Then I can boast you are my friend,hehehehe.
@clutterbug (1051)
• United States
12 Jul 09
If I were a true poet I would maybe be famous, lol. But since I am not famous, I just pretend to be a poet.
@jaiho2009 (39140)
• Philippines
12 Jul 09
" A WOMAN "
she is every house's foundation
without her a home would never be a family
she is every man's heart beat...without her
a man could be at lost.
give her sorrow and she will give u happiness
bring her your troulbles and she will let you feel peace
she is a good listener,without her nobody hear your crieS
she's a mother,without her there could be no good children.
give her direction,and she'll find the road
give her darkness and she knows where to find the light
give her doubts and she'll chase your fears away
she knows when to cry,she knows when to smile
she knows when to lie,she claims yet she denies
she always find good in everything.
a mother
a wife
a friend
a lover
a sister
everything she is rolled into ONE
for she is A WOMAN!
by:JAIHO2009
@vijayanths (7877)
• India
12 Jul 09
Oh jaiho, You made me love women. (I already do, but the intensity increased now)
Woman is a candle-burns herself to give light to others
@jaiho2009 (39140)
• Philippines
12 Jul 09
thanks my friend,i bet you are a good loving man.let me share this phrase...from my favorite song
"i'll stand before you just a man,
i held your hand to understand
what is life,when there is you,
as i promised you this day and forever
this promise of love "
@Citychic (4067)
• United States
12 Jul 09
Writing poems.........
Will mylot pay up?
Today I hear that mylot won't pay.
I was a little bit saddened when my earnings didn't update.
Some think it's an rumor,
others think it's the truth.
If mylot won't pay up, I"ll be giving them the boot
But for right now I"ll keep mylotting with peace and calm.
What about you Viyayanths, will you mylot with charm?
Some think it's an rumor,
others think it's the truth.
If mylot won't pay up, I"ll be giving them the boot
But for right now I"ll keep mylotting with peace and calm.
What about you Viyayanths, will you mylot with charm? @Citychic (4067)
• United States
12 Jul 09
Writing poems..........
Will mylot pay up?
Today I hear that mylot won't pay.
I was a little bit saddened when my earnings didn't update.
Some think it's a rumor, other think it's the truth.
If mylot don't pay up I'll give them the boot.
Some say don't worry, it's just a technical error.
So I'll keep right on mylotting until I start feeling terror.
Right now I"m feeling peace and calm.
what about you viyayanths, are you mylotting with charm?
@vijayanths (7877)
• India
12 Jul 09
I wonder what happens with mylot these days?
Don't they care to inform mylotters whether it pays,
Let us hope we will get our rewards we deserve,
Alas, time and mylot keep the result in reserve.
citychic, I am not good at making poems. You inspired me to write this poem, so I am not responsible.
@PeacefulWmn9 (10420)
• United States
12 Jul 09
Hi Vijay...yes, I've written thousands of poems and love the process. Many are printed on a blog I have. Two of them are below. Hope you enjoy.
A Japanese style Haiku
~~Geese
Grey geese in v-form
pointing northward toward home:
banner in blue sky.
Karen Chaffee 2009
Rondelet Style Poem
Love
A chanting song
days gone by when love did live
A chanting song
Once let me know where I belonged
Came a time we could not forgive
It drained away as through a sieve
A chanting song.
Karen Chaffee 2009
All Rights Reserved
@vijayanths (7877)
• India
12 Jul 09
Oh, I discovered the poet karen today. thanks for the poems.
here is an haiku for you.
"He went past Kaveri on a camel"
Kaveri is a river- a story hidden in it, that indirectly indicates the drought in that area.
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@PeacefulWmn9 (10420)
• United States
12 Jul 09
I imagine since the camel is a desert animal, it is the hidden hint at the drought. Very nice.
