Is my poem bad? Be honest!

United States
August 1, 2009 3:55am CST
Hello, I'm looking to continue in writing poems. I just wanted some honest opinions about this one. If it's bad you can tell me, it's not going to make me upset, mad, etc. I like knowing what others think, because if some think it's bad, then I can make it to where, you all like it. If you say its bad, please tell me what you didn't like about it. Thank you so much. Title: Nothing but pain! My life is nothing but pain, I can't help but to feel ashamed, When I looked into your eyes and said, "I do" I believed you, Does it make you feel good, to destroy me inside and out? What did I do to deserve such pain? All I ever did was love you, want you, and care for you, Don't take my life away, Just for you to feel good, I don't want to feel pain all my life, What happened to us? Were you ever happy with me... Please tell me the truth! Thank you so much!
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