Song Lyrics to Original Piece: "Obsessed"

@zoey7879 (3092)
Quincy, Illinois
September 12, 2009 4:45am CST
These are the lyrics to the original song, "Obsessed", that I penned in 2007. The original idea of the song was to be written into a style to be used as a duet in musical theater. I'm well open to critique and comments, but if you insist on being hateful and nasty, please tell me what you didn't like about this? Thanks :) He will keep pursuing you to the ground He will come to you without a sound He will take your heart and leave you empty It's only a matter of time until you see When you leave your heart open You are leaving yourself blind Guiding you into the darkness Your shattered soul they will find Could I ever hold you? For but a moment So I can finally be free When can I hold you? When can I taste you? And make you love me… There is no way I can love you with the darkness That's become you There is no way I can leave here With the madman Who's taken your place I will have you at any cost I will take what's mine at any cost I'll follow you to your grave You heart and soul I will enslave
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• Pamplona, Spain
12 Sep 09
Hiya zoey, The words of the song seem nice to me. I was just reading them and trying to put them to a tune in my head. Romantic and dramatic wording in this Song. But again because I can´t hear it to music it is different. On the whole I think that it would do very well why should´nt it.
@cyrus123 (6363)
• United States
13 Sep 09
This is good, I think. Have you set it to music yet? It would be good if you could sing it, or if you don't sing, get somebody else to sing it and video tape it on youtube. I would like to hear it sometime. Thank you for posting this. Kathy.