poetry in motion

Philippines
November 10, 2009 11:22pm CST
Life is a series of serious matters. We have each others' share of odds and ends, twists and turns as well as ups and downs. We learned our lessons well from our own experiences. Whatever our decisions maybe, doubtful or not we're still the ones responsible of the outcome of it. We lead to different paths of life, and wherever it will lead us, we have but to accept them with open mind and open heart. Wherever our journey will lead us to, for sure we will still find it somewhere THE JOURNEY When you walk with faith You will never go wrong Your strong convictions will guide you And you will never walk alone. God is always there To keep us safe from harm Wherever we go and whatever we do Our journey will follow us through. Each and every one of us Has reasons and purpose in life Just like you and me Let's keep our hopes always alive. Don't stop searching, whatever that search in Don't stop dreaming, whatever that dream is Don't stop hoping, whatever that hope is But amidst all these Never stop praying for God's mercies. Always count your blessings Either in small or big packages For they are endless graces That God showers us unending. Always follow the Golden Rule That's your best system of defense Whatever comes along the way It is your shield against life's adversities. Whatever your searches, dreams and hopes are Through God's own precise time, it will be granted soon Just keep trusting and believing in Him And wait for His divine intervention. by: Luz Feliza Dolores Natal Rymonte Did you like my poem? Were you able to relate it with your own? How did u find my manner of writing or my style in writing? Do you think I will have a space for my poems here on mylot? Can you share to me any comments and suggestions that need improvement to my poems?
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@hkkgra (26)
• United States
11 Nov 09
I loved it! I could completely relate to the message you portrayed. Your style of writing is concise and to the point. It grabs the readers attention from the get go. Unlike some poetry, it doesn't drag on to the very end. Instead, your vision of your life and its purpose flows smoothly. "The Journey" reminds me of the "Footprints in the Sand" verse. If I can relate and feel what the writing is trying to say, I like it. Personally, I think you have a place here on Mylot. I'm an avid poetry reader and writer. The only thing I would suggest is keep up the good work and write more. The words from your heart is there in this poem you wrote.
• Philippines
13 Nov 09
hello ms. or mr. hkkgra (15) 11.12.09 Please let me tell you before I composed it, i gathered all the best description and adjectives I thought best for this poem which I can easily relate to my readers and to my fellow mylot-ters (lol)I hope you really liked it. Maybe poem writng is another journey in life that will lead me somewhere and trusting I can reach far and wide and be heard of through my poems. Again, thank you so, so muuch amd I'm forever grateful to you. muah!!!!!
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@free_man (7336)
• United States
11 Nov 09
Hello Lady and welcome to my lot. Loved your poem and think it is great that you give God the credit. I think it is cool when someone can write something so moving. I think you will do great here on my lot. Hope you have a great day!
• Philippines
13 Nov 09
Hello Mr. free_man (258) 11.12.09 Thank you so much for appreciating my poem. Everything we do here, we always give credit to God for the knowledge and wisdom He bestowed upon as and all the blessing we receive from Him each day and for that we will be forever grateful to Him as well. I trustingly believe that poem writing is another journey in my life that will lead me somewhere. I hope through God's divine intervention, I can reach far and wide and be heard of through my poems. Again, thank you so so much.
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@free_man (7336)
• United States
13 Nov 09
Hello Lady and your welcome I love my dad he was a great guy. I think your poems will make it big keep up the good work. There is a site called associate content helium dot com that will publish stuff like that and really pay you for them. But you can't have them published anywhere else. I am telling you this cause I think your poems are worth a lot. Have a great day Lady!