poetry in motion
@lady_in_sexy_heels (15)
Philippines
November 10, 2009 11:22pm CST
Life is a series of serious matters. We have each others' share of odds
and ends, twists and turns as well as ups and downs. We learned our lessons
well from our own experiences. Whatever our decisions maybe, doubtful or not
we're still the ones responsible of the outcome of it.
We lead to different paths of life, and wherever it will lead us, we have
but to accept them with open mind and open heart. Wherever our journey will
lead us to, for sure we will still find it somewhere
THE JOURNEY
When you walk with faith
You will never go wrong
Your strong convictions will guide you
And you will never walk alone.
God is always there
To keep us safe from harm
Wherever we go and whatever we do
Our journey will follow us through.
Each and every one of us
Has reasons and purpose in life
Just like you and me
Let's keep our hopes always alive.
Don't stop searching,
whatever that search in
Don't stop dreaming,
whatever that dream is
Don't stop hoping,
whatever that hope is
But amidst all these
Never stop praying for God's mercies.
Always count your blessings
Either in small or big packages
For they are endless graces
That God showers us unending.
Always follow the Golden Rule
That's your best system of defense
Whatever comes along the way
It is your shield against life's adversities.
Whatever your searches, dreams and hopes are
Through God's own precise time,
it will be granted soon
Just keep trusting and believing in Him
And wait for His divine intervention.
by: Luz Feliza Dolores Natal Rymonte
Did you like my poem? Were you able to relate it with your own?
How did u find my manner of writing or my style in writing? Do you
think I will have a space for my poems here on mylot? Can you share
to me any comments and suggestions that need improvement to my poems?
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2 responses
@hkkgra (26)
• United States
11 Nov 09
I loved it! I could completely relate to the message you portrayed. Your style of writing is concise and to the point. It grabs the readers attention from the get go. Unlike some poetry, it doesn't drag on to the very end. Instead, your vision of your life and its purpose flows smoothly. "The Journey" reminds me of the "Footprints in the Sand" verse. If I can relate and feel what the writing is trying to say, I like it. Personally, I think you have a place here on Mylot. I'm an avid poetry reader and writer. The only thing I would suggest is keep up the good work and write more. The words from your heart is there in this poem you wrote.
@lady_in_sexy_heels (15)
• Philippines
13 Nov 09
hello ms. or mr. hkkgra (15) 11.12.09
Please let me tell you before I composed it, i gathered all the best description
and adjectives I thought best for this poem which I can easily relate to my readers and to my fellow mylot-ters (lol)I hope you really liked it.
Maybe poem writng is another journey in life that will lead me somewhere and
trusting I can reach far and wide and be heard of through my poems.
Again, thank you so, so muuch amd I'm forever grateful to you. muah!!!!!
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@lady_in_sexy_heels (15)
• Philippines
13 Nov 09
Hello Mr. free_man (258) 11.12.09
Thank you so much for appreciating my poem. Everything we do here, we always give credit to God for the knowledge and wisdom He bestowed upon as and all the blessing we receive from Him each day and for that we will be forever grateful to Him as well.
I trustingly believe that poem writing is another journey in my life that will lead me somewhere. I hope through God's divine intervention, I can reach far and wide and be heard of through my poems.
Again, thank you so so much.
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@free_man (7330)
• United States
13 Nov 09
Hello Lady and your welcome I love my dad he was a great guy. I think your poems will make it big keep up the good work. There is a site called associate content helium dot com that will publish stuff like that and really pay you for them. But you can't have them published anywhere else. I am telling you this cause I think your poems are worth a lot. Have a great day Lady!
