romance with a twist!

@cynthiann (18613)
Jamaica
November 11, 2009 12:28pm CST
THESE ARE SOME COMPETITION ENTRIES ASKING FOR A RHYME WITH THE MOST ROMANTIC FIRST LINE, BUT THE LEAST ROMANTIC SECOND LINE: I thought that I could love no other Until, that is, I met your brother. Roses are red, violets are blue, sugar is sweet, and so are you. But the roses are wilting, the violets are dead, the sugar bowl's empty, and so is your head. I see your face when I am dreaming. That's why I always wake up screaming. My love, you take my breath away. What have you stepped in to smell this way? What inspired this amorous rhyme? Two parts vodka, one part lime. I liked the second and last one. What one did you like and can you write a rhyme like this? I need a little lightheartedness today. Come on Dawn - you first!
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@dawnald (84075)
• Shingle Springs, California
11 Nov 09
Roses are red Violets are blue This lemon is sour This romance is too
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@dawnald (84075)
• Shingle Springs, California
11 Nov 09
You make me want to pucker So do lemons
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@dawnald (84075)
• Shingle Springs, California
11 Nov 09
Taking the bitter with the sweet Like smelling your feet
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@dawnald (84075)
• Shingle Springs, California
11 Nov 09
enough?
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@smedtra (77)
• Turkey
11 Nov 09
Darling, do you believe love at first sight? If so, please dont block my view.
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@cynthiann (18613)
• Jamaica
11 Nov 09
This is good
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@dawnald (84075)
• Shingle Springs, California
11 Nov 09
Very good indeed!
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• United States
22 Nov 09
No! These are the poems that always get me! What's wrong with them! They sound cool. Are you talking about fat people? I'm fat. No. It's probably deeper than that.
@ANTIQUELADY (36468)
• United States
12 Nov 09
U are very good at this. U gave me quite a laugh. Thanks. I never was good at rhyming or much else, lol.
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@cynthiann (18613)
• Jamaica
12 Nov 09
I'm glad that you got a laugh
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@ANTIQUELADY (36468)
• United States
12 Nov 09
Me to, need all the laughs i can get. If i had a button i would send it to u for doind soo good.
@Hatley (164237)
• Garden Grove, California
11 Nov 09
hi cynthiann okat here goes for me; Roses are red Violets are blue You do look overfed But what a view Mind if I go Phew!
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@cynthiann (18613)
• Jamaica
11 Nov 09
Oh this is excellent Hatley. Well done! You really have a talent
@AmbiePam (51159)
• United States
12 Nov 09
Those are terrific!
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@cynthiann (18613)
• Jamaica
12 Nov 09
Here's one for you, but not in the same genre: Der Little AmbiePam, She's her Mommy's special lamb She's her Daddy's special love And she came from Heaven above. She's her Mommy's little sweetheart Her Daddy's special lamb Her Father in heaven loves her And her name is AmbiePam!
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@AmbiePam (51159)
• United States
12 Nov 09
You put a smile on my face!
@paula27661 (15898)
• Australia
12 Nov 09
[i]“I see your face when I am dreaming. That's why I always wake up screaming.”[/i] And I love you so… But you wish that you would go… Right on out the door… You annoy me when you snore… And you are such a bore…
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@cynthiann (18613)
• Jamaica
12 Nov 09
Love it Paula, love it!
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@suzzy3 (8352)
13 Nov 09
"Your teeth are like stars they come out at night"."Your eyes are hot with passion all bloodshot" You could carry the shopping home in the bags under your eyes." I hope this lightens the mood just a few romantic sayings to make you laugh.
@cynthiann (18613)
• Jamaica
13 Nov 09
Oh this is great suzy, just great!
@suzzy3 (8352)
16 Nov 09
Just a few will think of some more.