An ideal man
By raynejasper
@raynejasper (2322)
Philippines
January 21, 2010 11:11pm CST
..Hi fellows.. I got this poem from a friend and I love the content.. I just wanna share it with you..
My ideal man should be loving
Who can give the affection that I'm longing
That even though I am crying,
He can make me smile by means of kissing...
Handsome may not be,
But surely not too ugly,
So that I can tell to anybody
That he is the only one for me..
..Do you like it..? Any comment?
1 person likes this
6 responses
@Bluestream (235)
• China
23 Jan 10
I think it a good poem. Do you like poem? I like poems. I like to read poems and sometimes I also try to write some.
@maygodblessu44 (7336)
• India
6 Feb 10
Hello my friend raynejasper Ji,
It is simply balanced feelings , very well given poetic language. I specially like last stanza,where poet has kept dignity of all less ugly people as well. Remembver Lotus is grown in shallow and muddy/dirty water, tehre are rhorns all around rose plants/flowers, also sandle wood remains intact even giving coolness to whirling around poisnous snakes. Yourpem is wirth appriciable. Try and fram esome more and I will wish to read them as well.
May God bless You and have a great time.
@advokatku (4033)
• Indonesia
22 Jan 10
not handsome, but not too bad ... achhhhh ... This was confusing