I made this poem when i was only 8 yrs old

Philippines
February 23, 2010 6:50pm CST
I made this one when i was only 8 yrs old....i had a big crush to a junior highschool that time that i was able to make one for him: MY INSPIRATION Its not a dream Nor an imagination But its the urge of my emotion That made me feel of this attraction Over one of God's creation Looking at him is only my action As a means of our communication But how can i show him this affection If he's in another location I cant seem to find any solution To end this crazy confusion But one this is certain He's my inspiration I haven't seen the guy for like 12 yrs...but when i do remember the 1st poetry i made he always comes back in my mind. I wonder where he is now?
2 responses
@yresh12 (3212)
• Philippines
24 Feb 10
You have been blessed with talent. I was never like that when I was eight. The passion for writing is there but the talent? Nope.. I had to acquire it and learn from my mistakes. I am very happy for you that at a young age you were able to write this kind of poetry. What do you call it nina? a crush? or lover?Have a good day!
• Philippines
24 Feb 10
Thank you yresh12. I have been blessed with so many talents. Im currently a tattoo artist as well. I can sing very nice songs and i can dance hiphop as well. Writing poetry is another talent that i have. I got so much to thank for. And about him, i feel giddy when i see him or i get to talk with him before, but i know its just a crush...i was only a a kid then.
@yresh12 (3212)
• Philippines
28 Feb 10
Haha, You'll never know. Got loads of talent huh.. I hope you will excel on all of them...
@Kirinx (1688)
• United States
28 Oct 10
Wow you were a good poet even at the young and tender age of 8 years old. Your poem is nice and nicely expresses how you felt at that age thats creative and i like your poem. I would of been happy to recieve this poem.