Darkened Bliss

@tammy27 (1241)
Philippines
March 4, 2011 6:47am CST
it's in the darkness where i hide and where myself i confine afraid to seek the light afraid to open my eyes all my emotions are drained and my heart has been betrayed in one corner is where i just sit trying to savor all the pain i already forgot how to smile nor to laugh and feel fine all i have is internal bleeding wounds and scars in my being it's only grieve that loves me and secrecy is what i comprise i worship isolation i glorify suppression im nothing but wrath and distress burden, betrayal and wretch but at least im not a pretender im just a living Gothic Emo.
2 responses
hemlockspruce25
@hemlockspruce25 (501)
• Philippines
5 Mar 11
Wow, really nice composition. What is the driving force that made you write this? I often write free-versed poems too but isn't able to save them during typhoon Reming. Keep it up!
tammy27
@tammy27 (1241)
• Philippines
5 Mar 11
thanks for the comment.. :) driving force?? i totally have no idea. i just feel the poem somehow.. and sit beside a thick Webster's dictionary , the with dictionary and thesaurus in one. hehehehe
babyanna
@babyanna (1216)
• China
4 Mar 11
Hi,tammy27! Did you write this?It's wonderful!Beautiful poem.I only wrote poems in Chinese,still can't write so long in English.Gonna try.Keep on,my friend. Have a nice day!
tammy27
@tammy27 (1241)
• Philippines
4 Mar 11
yes, i did it like 3 years ago. hehe just trying to expose it for the first time. so far so good... thanks so much for the comment. :)