The lost romance of the moon... ( My poem)
By whispers168
@whispers168 (768)
United States
July 31, 2011 7:04am CST
Moon so high looking far below
Lighting the way for her lost love
In the twlight glow
Looking and searching with her heavenely spot light
Sadness plays across her pale full face
He left her one day for earth
Wanting to adore her with wild roses
Never to return he lost his way
Now she has lost her until he returns
Once in a while the faint scent of wild roses plays across her mind
Memories of him her brightest star still shines in her eyes
Falling to earth he left her behind
The most beautiful shooting star she had ever seen
All these thoughts haunt her dreams
She rises every night in search of him when the sun sleeps
Trying to guid her lost love back into twlight heaven by her side
Moon beams and flashing lights
Millions of nights have passed as ahe ages
Love missing as she sighs
Still she waits if it takes eternity
Still she waits while he picks his roses and stumbles across earth...
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4 responses
@Spamhater (8)
• United States
31 Jul 11
It seems like a very nice poem and sorta reminds me of this kids book I read awhile back that involed some Eskimo girl or something and the moon but still, very nice.
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@shibham (16977)
• India
31 Jul 11
Wordsworth said that " poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings". I applaud you for having such feelings and sharing it here. I also write poem but on my own language, hence i know, how hard to write a poem and basically a tremendous like this one.
One thing i wish to ask you.... are you sure the moon should be considered as HE, here moon is a feminine gender. anyway, keep it up and have a nice day.
@whispers168 (768)
• United States
31 Jul 11
Thank you for sharing your thoughts.I see the moon as female also.I might of have put he but I meant she.lol..
@la_chique (1498)
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31 Jul 11
A very beautiful and soulful poem. Possibly a hidden meaning about lovers who cannot be together and have to hide their love from the world?
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@whispers168 (768)
• United States
31 Jul 11
Just a thought one night when I was looking up at the moon.It inspired me to write this poem about lost love.
@PointlessQuestions (15397)
• United States
4 Sep 11
Very beautiful poem. When I first started writing I started with poetry, and then went on to article writing, which is what I do now. I can still write poetry, but I can only seem to write one when I am in a sad soulful mood.
