help to write a composition

Russian Federation
January 12, 2012 9:12am CST
Hello everyone. My little sister has a homework. She has to write a composition about her holiday. (there must be the introduction, main chapter, conclusion)So i do not know what to advice her, but could you tell me what is the best introduction. She must use more ajectives, Please give some examples like bright, exciting, incredible, awesome... I am not good enough at english... so help me to help her...
1 response
@Bluedoll (16774)
• Canada
12 Jan 12
Introduction You can use the standard method of throughout. Each paragraph can have an introduction. Last week I enjoyed my holiday because I liked being with my mom. The conclusion should be about the same thing. Why do I like a holiday and being with my mom for example. It can close the paragraph and is the same for all composition. See the above paragraph? This is about method. You can write something unique only known to you with simple words then polish it up later in the response you got as well here in mylot. I hope this helps you a little with composition construction. Conclusion If you write I went to the zoo you can add adjectives later on. What was the zoo like? Was it busy, active, peaceful, noisy? Find many adjectives to say busy such as bustling and lively. I went to the bustling lively zoo. Also, you can invent words for went like traveled or journeyed. Improving a composition after writing it is called polishing your composition and is a common way to write one.
@Bluedoll (16774)
• Canada
12 Jan 12
Introduction You can use the standard method of construction throughout the work. Each paragraph can have an introduction, main theme and conclusion. You can write for example, last week we enjoyed our fun and exciting holiday because we liked being together. A conclusion should be the same theme as what was in the introduction. If the theme is being together the composition should show why do you like a holiday and being with your mom for example. The conclusion can close the paragraph in the same way it does for all of the composition. Main theme If we look at the above paragraph we can see all the components, introduction, main and conclusion. This comment is about method. Your child can write something unique only known to her with very simple words and then have fun adding to the things she wrote later. I hope this helps you a little with simple composition construction. Conclusion If you write, “I went to the zoo” you can always add fun adjectives later on. What was the zoo like? Was it busy, active, peaceful or noisy? Start out by writing simple things you remember then find adjectives that best describe it. If it was busy you can add words like bustling and lively. I went to the bustling lively zoo. Also, you can invent words for went to the zoo, like traveled or journeyed to the bustling lively zoo. Improving a composition after writing it is called polishing your composition and is a common way to write that is a rough draft followed by improvements until you are satisfied.
• Russian Federation
26 Jan 12
thank you. I have not seen that you had answered. lol