What would you say in a graduation speech as a guest speaker?
By secretbear
@secretbear (19448)
Philippines
February 23, 2012 8:58am CST
Our big boss instructed me to write her a speech for a graduation ceremony this coming April. She got invited as a guest speaker in a university graduation and she wants me to draft a speech that she can use as her talking points.
Frankly, I was appalled by this although it's probably part of my work. What made me felt that way was I had no idea what to write about, I had no starting points because she didn't give me any. The invitation said the university's graduation had no theme to give freedom for the guest speaker to write about anything. And her instruction was only "Please draft me a speech for my comments". How on earth would I know what she wants to say in her speech?
I'm just glad that I had lots of time to think about it because the graduation is still at least a month away.
But if you were a guest speaker in a graduation ceremony, what would your speech be about?
I'm just glad that I had lots of time to think about it because the graduation is still at least a month away.
But if you were a guest speaker in a graduation ceremony, what would your speech be about?3 people like this
11 responses
@writersedge (22563)
• United States
23 Feb 12
The usual:
Congrats on all the work you've done.
It's a beginning, not an end. The beginning of all kinds of neat possibilities.
It depends some on what kind of college and what kinds of things people study there. What degrees they get and what they will be doing with them. Like a pre-med speach for graduation would be different from a college where people are learning to become teachers. So you need to know a little about the college. Did the college or students have anything special that they did to help the community? Did they pioneer any special studies?
Also depends on the person you're making the speech for. Did this person graduate from there? Did this person hire people from there? Why did they ask her to speak as opposed to someone else?
You need to know more in order to have more to work with.
@secretbear (19448)
• Philippines
24 Feb 12
Yeah, that's right. I don't know where our boss graduated from college.
And I'm sure we didn't hire anyone from that school. Although I know that their school is relevant to us. I mean, the flagship course of that school is relevant to us. Actually, I have thought of my first line and it's related to what you said. I thought of "This is the day". 
And I'm sure we didn't hire anyone from that school. Although I know that their school is relevant to us. I mean, the flagship course of that school is relevant to us. Actually, I have thought of my first line and it's related to what you said. I thought of "This is the day". 
@secretbear (19448)
• Philippines
25 Feb 12
Thanks.
I know a little about the college but I could probably ask about it to some people at work. Well, about what our boss faced when she was student, I probably won't ask her that. I guess she would just have to supply it impromptu. 
I know a little about the college but I could probably ask about it to some people at work. Well, about what our boss faced when she was student, I probably won't ask her that. I guess she would just have to supply it impromptu. 
@writersedge (22563)
• United States
24 Feb 12
Nice, dramatic! You go!
I've read the other suggestions. They're very, very good. I just think you need more information in order to do this. It does sound like you know a lot about the college or at least a little bit that could help you. But even the suggestions I've read sound like you need to know more about your boss or at least what positives and negatives the boss faced or the students will face. Take care.
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@kun2349 (23381)
• Singapore
24 Feb 12
If i'm in your shoes, i will be equally shocked! haha =D
BUt since it's a graduation ceremony, some basic congrats are required, along with after school life, transition into working life from school life. It need not be too long, but just sharing of experience and their success stories? That's what i think, and what i hope to hear whenever there's a guest speaker on stage.. haha
There's no need for a long speech and if there's anything more, it's up to her to express it on her own, not u, secret ^^
BUt since it's a graduation ceremony, some basic congrats are required, along with after school life, transition into working life from school life. It need not be too long, but just sharing of experience and their success stories? That's what i think, and what i hope to hear whenever there's a guest speaker on stage.. haha
There's no need for a long speech and if there's anything more, it's up to her to express it on her own, not u, secret ^^2 people like this
@secretbear (19448)
• Philippines
24 Feb 12
I certainly agree, Kun. I can offer her a draft of a general speech but she would have to add her own ideas. 

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@jaiho2009 (39140)
• Philippines
23 Feb 12
The best subject could be your "boss" life.
How she reached her position, how she struggle to reach her dream.
How it is be a fresh graduate- looking for job.
Tips on job hunting- what to expect and expect the unexpected.
You can also relate through yourself...what did you go through after graduation and your experiences.
Most speeches are all about motivation particularly with graduation.
have a good day 

@secretbear (19448)
• Philippines
24 Feb 12
I wish I can write about her life. But I have no idea how our boss became what she is now. All I know about her are her bad traits. 

@craziestqueenever (1819)
• Philippines
23 Feb 12
The speech depends on what level are they. If I'll be a Guest Speaker, I will tell the graduates on what kind of career they should pursue. I'll tell them that in choosing a career is all about their passion. They should love what they're doing so that it would be easier for them to adjust on their jobs. I'll also tell them that what they learned in school is not enough. They have to face the real world and one of their Greatest teacher is life.
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@secretbear (19448)
• Philippines
24 Feb 12
Wow. That's really a great input. Thank you so much! I can write on that since it's a general topic. 
@heartbit (237)
• Philippines
23 Feb 12
i will be graduating college next year, so i will be able to hear from a guest speaker then. and if im in a graduating class, i would really love to hear how your boss had made it this far after her graduation. i always hear the words like, its a jungle out there after when you leave the school. what is that jungle like? what will be our struggles, how do we overcome it? i would love to hear the tips and very encouraging words.
i hope this helps. have a nice day!
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@secretbear (19448)
• Philippines
24 Feb 12
That's a great idea! But I wish I can write about my boss's hardships. I don't have any idea what she went through to reach her position. 

@spyscorpion (1)
•
24 Feb 12
speech about
1st. congrats
2nd. our preparation before facing the job field reality
3rd. giving some tips and tricks
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@secretbear (19448)
• Philippines
25 Feb 12
Thanks. Those are really specific suggestions. I appreciate it. 
@drannhh (15219)
• United States
25 Feb 12
My speech would be about nonconformity. I would say that one reason the young people in the audience were there and graduating was because they had learned to fit in and do what they were told to do. But now they are adults going out into the world with the potential to change it. I would ask them if they know the meaning of potential -- and tell them that a person who has it is a person who never did anything. I would tell them to go out and do things. I would tell them to take risks, stick up for underdogs, walk the untrodden path.
But most of all I would say that their graduation is not an end but a beginning and to keep learning more every day for the rest of their lives, and to put their knowledge to use to make the world a better place.
Then I would assure them that they CAN do it, and even if they do not achieve all they plan to, they are still sowing the seeds for others to pick up where they left off.
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@secretbear (19448)
• Philippines
25 Feb 12
That's really great, drannhh!!!
I think you'd be a great and inspiring speaker. 
@roberten (3128)
• United States
26 Feb 12
1. Congratulations
2. At-a-boy, job well done
3. Life begins now
4. Contribute, give back, pay it forward
5. Remain hopeful always
6. Happiness is usually followed by success
7. Go out and change the world
Hope you are successful with your assigned tasked.
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@secretbear (19448)
• Philippines
2 Mar 12
Hi roberten! Actually, I have already made a draft speech. I gave it to her already but she hasn't given it back to me for finalization. The graduation was moved to March 30. I hope she doesn't make any more comments on it. I wanna move on to a different task. 

@jazel_juan (15745)
• Philippines
24 Feb 12
Oh i find that quite heavy. You need to say something that will inspire the graduates. Hmmm maybe you could tell them that "real" life is harder and they should just rather sit on their couches and watch tv hahaha kidding ok?
well maybe you could tell them to first thank their parents for guiding them, for putting them in such good schools..that they may not live as adults that could make a difference in the world. That they are not in their "real" life and must face it with optimism and see to it that they won't be sucked in what people call the rat race. that somehow they will find themselves fulfilling what they need to do..and also make a difference and at the same time living a "life".
it is hard but i hope you can do it.
well maybe you could tell them to first thank their parents for guiding them, for putting them in such good schools..that they may not live as adults that could make a difference in the world. That they are not in their "real" life and must face it with optimism and see to it that they won't be sucked in what people call the rat race. that somehow they will find themselves fulfilling what they need to do..and also make a difference and at the same time living a "life".
it is hard but i hope you can do it. 1 person likes this
@secretbear (19448)
• Philippines
25 Feb 12
Wow. Those are really good words, Jazel. I would love to imprint with them the optimism they will really need. I know how hard it is to live in the real world. It's really different from school.
Thanks a lot. 
@bagarad (14283)
• Paso Robles, California
24 Feb 12
Sounds like you've already gotten a lot of good advice. I agree it will help to know as much as you can about the school and the graduates' field of studies. MOst graduation speakers tend to speak in platitudes and generalities in their efforts to be inspiring, and most graduates are really just hoping it will be fairly short. I think most of the graduates will be as exited to listen to the speech as your boss seems to be about addressing them. It will be a challenge to keep them all awake. Most are probably thinking about the parties that will follow the ceremony more than what's going on.
I'm afraid I didn't even attend my university graduation. There were thousands in my graduating class and they don't hand the diplomas out at the ceremony anyway. I could think of nothing more boring than rehearsals, a long march in, a long march out, and listening to all those names read. A lot of my class didn't go. Renting the cap and gown just added expenses.
So my advice is to keep it short and sweet and they will love your boss.
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@secretbear (19448)
• Philippines
25 Feb 12
They will love my boss with all her pretentions?
What's making it more difficult for me is that my boss isn't such a nice person in real life.
It will be hard to make her appear good in front of those graduates. Oh well, I just gotta do my job, right? There should be nothing personal. 
What's making it more difficult for me is that my boss isn't such a nice person in real life.
It will be hard to make her appear good in front of those graduates. Oh well, I just gotta do my job, right? There should be nothing personal. 
@thelmadacullo112659 (642)
• Philippines
24 Feb 12
As speaker on that day, i would rather say congratulations to all graduates .Wish them more lucks and happy day in their life...Go forward and hit ur ambition in life.Thats ur future...
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