I love poetry!!!!
By blogger13
@blogger13 (46)
Canada
August 4, 2012 9:02pm CST
I used to write poetry, when I was a teenager. I haven't written anything in years, not to sure why that is, I just don't write anymore. I miss it a lot, I would like to share some of my poetry with you:
It falls so freely,
and slowly but yet,
everything around it,
is moving so fast,
and out of control.
When I watch it fall,
I wish that I was it.
Life is so crazy,
but yet I stay in,
one spot and I rule,
my world and control,
where I will go and what,
I become in life.
While everybody else has,
no idea where they will go.
They just will go with the,
flow and hope for the best.
Now that I watch it fall,
I came to a realization that,
I am that thing that falls slowly down,
but I have control and half the,
time no one can see me.
What do you think? What is the thing?
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2 responses
@watersprite (168)
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10 Aug 12
Even re-reading after you gave the game away, I can see only a few fleeting reference to you being as the rain, perhaps I expect things to be a bit more obvious. That being aside it is a very interesting and though provoking poem, you should write more. Have you tried one of the social peotry sites such as poetrysoup ? you'll get feedback comments from like minded individuals who know a thing or two.
@blogger13 (46)
• Canada
9 Aug 12
Thanks, I love writing I have have such a wild imagination. I was thinking of maybe writing a book or something maybe one day!
