Sunday Morning
By imAbigael
@imAbigael (475)
Philippines
September 22, 2012 10:13pm CST
It's sunday morning, the sun is shinning.
Lets go beyond the world, hold my hand.
Stay with me, and I'll never let you go.
Come with me, and I'll show you my world.
Love me, and I will love you for eternity.
-ACS
3 responses
@imAbigael (475)
• Philippines
25 Sep 12
You cant feel the point, I'm so sorry..
I want to explain why its sunday morning..
Its sunday because its all about God, You cant feel? Its God that I want to say that to me every sunday or everyday... Poem means courage and motivation..
@sadmeow (34)
• Philippines
2 Oct 12
Oh..I'm sorry too:( that wasn't what I wanted to mean. I get you poem and such. It's pretty lovely. It's just that lots of people these days say beautiful things but doesn't have that one thing that they should appreciate the most..it's just too sad. So, I was a bit emoting on your poem which I thought there was no God in it. I'm deeply sorry and I meant no offense.
Have a good day dear:) God bless?
@watersprite (168)
•
24 Sep 12
Nice little verse, lovely sentiment, In my opinion you've used the word world twice too close together, it sound odd when I read it out loud. The last line is super. Keep writing.
@imAbigael (475)
• Philippines
25 Sep 12
Yes I saw it and thanks for reminding me of that, I should be detailed more for using words. :)
@imAbigael (475)
• Philippines
25 Sep 12
thank you so much! yup its already sunny here even though we have bad weather here in our country so keep safe and take care!
