help !!!!!! sos!!! does anyone can check my article???

China
December 19, 2012 2:18am CST
My native Language is no English, but I have to write the summary of master thesis in English. I have written it in Japanese, and translate it English. Does anyone can review it for me? The summary is as below. { As the popular method for producing nanofibers, electrospinning method, composite melt spinning, melt-blown method, etc. can be mentioned. In recent years, electrospinning method has been studied a lot. But there is a disadvantage that for amounts of solvents have been used for producing nannofibers. it requires a recovery process of the solvent for mass production. Therefor I devised a way of spinning nanofibers without using solvents, by utilizing the principle of centrifugal force. ..... }
3 responses
• United States
6 Jan 13
I know you posted this 3 weeks ago, but I thought I would kind of play with it a little bit. I hope this is suitable. { Some popular methods for producing nanofibers are electrospinning, composite-melt spinning, and melt-blown method. In recent years, the electrospinning method has been frequently studied. There is a disadvantage, though, for the amounts of solvents being used for producing nanofibers and that is it requires a recovery process of the solvent for mass production. After discovering this disadvantage, I have devised a way to spin nanofibers without using solvents by utilizing the principle of centrifugal force. }
@TheCatLady (4691)
• Israel
26 Dec 12
In the first sentence you need a comma after etc. Sentence two needs a definite article; the electrospinning... Let me just fix it up as best I can. I don't understand the concept of electrospinning, but I am good in my native tounge. { As the popular method for producing nanofibers, the electrospinning method, composite melt spinning, melt-blown method, etc., can be mentioned. In recent years, the electrospinning method has been studied a lot. But there is a disadvantage that for amounts of solvents have been used for producing nannofibers, requires a recovery process of the solvent for mass production. ]Therefor, I devised a way of spinning nanofibers without using solvents, by utilizing the principle of centrifugal force. ..... } The sentence beginning with but is a bit ungainly and needs revision.
@nitinnair89 (2900)
• India
19 Dec 12
Hi friend. I really do not find anything wrong here except the spelling of 'therefore' :)