A poem I wrote this morn for those who may be bit discouraged

United States
April 4, 2013 7:56am CST
Look how far you've come Reach down into your being and pull up all that ugly stuff That keeps dragging you away from feeling that you are enough You have so much potential and you have overcome so much Don't let the fear of failing burden you with its awful touch Just think of where you have been and where you are right now You never thought you'd make it; yet, here you are some how It's amazing what you've accomplished and wonderful what you do Don't let another's comments ever rob this victory from you. Each day you are getting better and each day is a bit more bright. The things that once held you down can no longer block your light You're finding those things once lost and others can't knock you down Just look at who you've become and all of your progress all around. (c) joy pachowicz aka littlefrancisn
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4 responses
@nyssa102 (748)
• United States
4 Apr 13
Beautiful work. I really like that you took the time to post that for us to see and read. I like positive people. We need more good in the world. Be blessed. Also, there are webpages such as www.hubpages.com where people post their poetry online. Good luck, and look for more great work from you!
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• United States
4 Apr 13
Yes I have heard of hubpages..I may try to share my work there as well.. I have been putting my poems into categories..so will see what other ways I can reach out.. I believe we all have things to share ..
@subhojit10 (7375)
• India
4 Apr 13
Wow, such a beautifully written poem by you and as u have mentioned ups and downs are part and parcel of life and we lay down our weapons so easily in front of the circumstances then we can never achieve our goals, dreams and aspirations. we need to stay in high spirits and stay positive as much as possible.
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• United States
4 Apr 13
It's not always easy to stay happy ..there are times when the clouds will hide the Sun and even let down the rain..we just need to realize this is normal ;)
@jagjit273 (1754)
• India
4 Apr 13
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• Indonesia
4 Apr 13
Cool poem, it have deep meaning too! Keep up the good work!