Goodbye To You, Hello New / myLot

United States

April 11, 2013 11:20pm CST

I want you to know I have to let you go I'm moving on I'm staying strong I hope you don't mind I'm leaving you behind Those feelings were hard to shake But there are new memories to be made A new beginning is on it's way

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4 responses

TLilly12

@TLilly12 (1229)

• United States

12 Apr 13

I like this poem you have, mad it really nice, I like to write but I think I will stick, with doing all my writing here in Mylot, no where else these other sits,e don't stay up long enough for me, to earn any money from them, keep up the good work.

goodbye to you

hello new

oldsoul

@oldsoul (53)

• United States

12 Apr 13

:-) Thank you! I'm fairly new to this site, and am enjoying my experience so far. This is actually the first time I've posted/showed anyone other than a few close friends my poetry. I appreciate the kind and encouraging comments!

RandomnessPrincessx3

@RandomnessPrincessx3 (280)

• United States

12 Apr 13

Very nice. I love how you expressed your feelings in the simplicity of poetry. Nothing wrong with a new beginning.

oldsoul

@oldsoul (53)

• United States

12 Apr 13

Thank you for the compliment! I have a pretty shy personality, so I do best with sharing and expressing my feelings and thoughts in writing lyrics and poetry. I actually have a whole binder dedicated to that type of writing I do.

Angel

@nanayangel (7877)

• Philippines

21 Apr 13

Hi there Oldsoul! That is a beautiful poem. It is very simple but it conveys a clear message and it is sad and liberating at the same time. If this is written based from your current emotions, I am happy that you are finally letting go of what makes you feel down. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem with us.

@nitinnair89 (2899)

• India

20 Apr 13

wow..this one was really a short and sweet poem. keep it up..and keep posting.