Tag Line for a business
By quawertz
@quawertz (777)
Philippines
April 24, 2013 10:52pm CST
My friend wants to open an online store and she wanted to have a tag line with the store's name. the name of her store is cheapskate and I came up with this tag line for her "cheap price for your cheap budget".
I want to know guys if my tag line is appropriate or not offensive? My friend is a little hesitant, she thinks it might offend some and in return less customers for her store.
Please help.
2 responses
@dionysianspirit (161)
• Canada
25 Apr 13
It is kind of offensive because it is implying anybody who shops there has a cheap budget.
Maybe give it a little tweak and use:
"cheap prices for your personal budget"
I would lose the repetition of the buzzword in favour of making the the potential customers feel that their budget, albeit a small one, isn't "cheap".
