Baby’s Breath

calm flowers...like a baby's breath
Lagos, Nigeria
June 30, 2013 9:35pm CST
Who said anything about forgiveness? Please, be honest with yourself. Forgiveness is not what you want. And, to be fair, for- givens is not what she’s granting. She pours that out over onto unto many feet, every day. She forgave you, almost, be- fore you were born. We all lose track. This was to have been sonnet 5 in a series (make it so), and, so’s to square it with the rest, and make a circle of breath, be honest: you want her miracle. Yes, again. She was one long before meeting you, passing, you, passing, beautiful … and you saw it, not. And you saw her. But –
2 responses
@riseme (1)
• Chengdu, China
12 Sep 14
Nice words
• United States
1 Jul 13
it seems intriguing and interesting, but the spacing in the way you typed/posted it makes it really hard to read like a sonnet...and also your info about it being the 5th in a series seems to have wound up in the middle of it.....hard to read and get the flow...