A poem of Depression

By VEA
Manila, Philippines
August 24, 2013 1:17pm CST
at the middle of everything things got complicated i never thought this is what im seeing alone, misunderstood, and fustrated i dont know what to do i cant run, hide or even stop for a while i just wish to make everything undo and i just want to unwind why did God let this happen? im tired, im depressed im a failure when will this hell come to an end will i ever make myself sure? did He, the one, heard my cry? is He, the powerful, doing something for me? did He, the almighty, ever try? is it worth living to be me?
3 responses
25 Aug 13
Hi vhea, I can feel your depression written behind your poem. I like how your poem was made. It was written with sincerity. It's not wrong to feel that way. There's a time for everything.. if you feel sad then let that be. if you feel happy cherish that moment. for life is not just full of happiness.. in life, we can experience every thing including failure.. sometimes things are not happening the way we think it should be. sometimes we wish we could just undo every thing that we don't like. but life is not like that, every thing becomes a part of life and let's use that as a stepping stone.. I hope you will feel better soon.
2 people like this
• Manila, Philippines
26 Aug 13
thank you so much and yah im feeling better right now^^ God bless!
@Bluedoll (16774)
• Canada
24 Aug 13
@shimichimi It is honest, reaching and explains so much I want to ask the questions myself and try to find the answers, so the poem has done it's work. It reached me. If it was mine (which is not) I might leave off the questions marks or not, Poems are great, they do not have to follow any rules - so I might not follow straight lines (but that is hard to do here in format) "did He___the one___hear my cry___is he___thepowerful__doing something"
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• Manila, Philippines
26 Aug 13
oh yah! i'll keep that in mind! thank you and God bless!
@Bluedoll (16774)
• Canada
26 Aug 13
@shimichimi It is your poem and you can do with him what you like. You could keep him just as he is or change him. Even if your feelings change your poem can live on for I think he deserves to - you poem expresses something and that is all a poem needs to do right?
• Manila, Philippines
26 Aug 13
@Bluedoll you are right!
• Aberdeen, Scotland
24 Aug 13
Great job You know what - I think sometimes we look to God a bit too much and sometimes we have to take responsibility for what we do ourselves. Do something for yourself, God would want you to!!
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• Manila, Philippines
26 Aug 13
yah im starting to have fun and spending more time with my friends who are of course understand me better than i can. thank you! and God bless!