MURDER (dark poetry)
@cello28 (76)
Philippines
May 18, 2014 1:29am CST
"MURDER"
Wandering through the beautiful park,
This lovely sweet young lady met a strange young looking man.
This man who has angelic eyes is filled with evil desires,
Drawn by his sweet words, this young lady fell into his trap.
With force, violence, and intimidation,
He took her away from her beautiful world.
When everything turned gloomy, this young man did all his demonic rituals.
Then depth of darkness begins to enslave her soul.
Tears start to fall in her weary eyes.
Helpless!! She cried for mercy...
"Please don't kill me," she begged.
But no one could hear her loudest screams.
She was choked up with so much terror,
Suffocated in her own scent of death.
Alas! Darkness is consummated!
Knowing that this will be her twisted fate,
She spoke her last words, "Good bye Cruel World!"
Then her lifeless body couldn't be saved anymore.
MURDER!
-tameless- April 7, 2014
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@sunilmishra7756 (4272)
• Moradabad, India
18 May 14
MURDER OF HATRED IS LOVE .
THANKS.
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@sunilmishra7756 (4272)
• Moradabad, India
20 May 14
@cello28
Thank you very much for a beautiful comment.
THE WISE MAN DOES NOT COMPETE , THEREFORE, NOBODY CAN COMPETE WITH HIM.
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@cello28 (76)
• Philippines
20 May 14
@sunilmishra7756 very much true, why do we have to compete with someone greater, someone who bestowed us knowledge and wisdom. He owns our thoughts therefore we need to use such gift according to His purpose. thanks for commenting on my post. :-)
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@johnnygreybeard (181)
• United States
18 May 14
Such a creative expression of so much pain felt.
It is a lovely poem if sorrow.
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