Do you think i can rap for a white girl?

August 14, 2015 10:50am CST
i'm 16 and wrotr this myself
A rap i wrote about breaking up with someone and missing them. I'm 16 btw and I really enjoy writing raps. I am mostly inspired by lil kim and i think that n...
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5 responses
Tiah101
@Tiah101 (206)
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15 Aug 16
@rappingheathx (1) Did you remove the video?...it is not available from this side.
Moumita Roy
@MeeRoy (19)
• Guwahati, India
15 Aug 15
it's quite good girl. you can try harder and be a good one.
Sandy KS
@rusty2rusty (6764)
• Defiance, Ohio
14 Aug 15
I assume you can rap. But to be honest the music was louder than what you rapped. So, I couldn't hear you but seen your lips move. In my opinion, a rap isn't any good if people can't hear it. is there a way for you to turn the music lower. So, I can listen again?
AnjaP
@Rollo1 (16677)
• Boston, Massachusetts
14 Aug 15
You're much prettier than Lil Kim. I agree that the music is a little louder than your voice but I could hear the words. You're very talented. Good luck if you pursue this.
Yuki
@yukimori (10183)
• United States
14 Aug 15
You know, I generally don't care for rap, but that wasn't bad at all. I agree that the music is a bit too loud. It makes it hard to understand what you're saying.