Short Fantasy Story Review – Stephanie Potter – Gardening
@arthurchappell (44941)
Preston, England
October 29, 2015 12:59pm CST
2015 Mammoth /Robinsons Press – Spoiler alerts
A young mute girl, traumatized by anti-Semitic pogroms in Europe in the early 1930’s, arrives penniless in London where she is taken in by a convent where she starts working on the gardens. She notices an unusual number of adder snakes, including one with two heads in the garden.
An inner voice guides her to an obscure Latin text in the convent library which she is able to read and decipher without having learned Latin. The text teaches her that the fall of Adam & Eve was grossly misunderstood or deliberately obfuscated. The tree of knowledge was actually there to teach us about healing, which also meant having to suffer pain that would need healing. Adam focussed too much on the suffering, and brutally supressed Eve’s gentler healing beliefs and set the church on the wrong course.
Her efforts to share her discovery leads to her disappearance and that of the text, suppressed by the Church her heretical ideas challenged. With that the story ends. An intriguing conspiracy theory notion that is suggested and then never explored further.
Arthur Chappell
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@arthurchappell (44941)
• Preston, England
30 Oct 15
I'd say this was the opposite in trying to see them as innocent and blaming the church instead
@arthurchappell (44941)
• Preston, England
30 Oct 15
@sofssu It's what writer Brian Aldiss called 'a shaggy God story'. It is a common almost clichéd theme.
@sofssu (23660)
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30 Oct 15
@arthurchappell Okay the better option.. The church. ..The blame game never ends..does it? it started right there in the garden.. 

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@arthurchappell (44941)
• Preston, England
30 Oct 15
very much the point of the story yes, and it is written by a woman. The girl discovering the truth is herself suppressed by the church.
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