Nefarious!
By Jekca
@Jessicalynnt (50523)
Centralia, Missouri
November 17, 2015 11:02am CST
Yet more old poems have been saved from the Bubtanic sinking, some of better quality than others. This author for one is glad though, it's sad to see a good poem go into extinction.... This one was one word challenge, and the word was Nefarious!
Nefarious she was, in name and in deed
Covetous and sinful, chock full of greed.
Plotting and schemes, plans seeped in hate,
Till finally one day, round came her fate.
Wicked in story, legend grew long
brought heroes a'calling, following the song
of treasure and triumph, of questing and might
when right conquers wrong, what a glorious fight!
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11 responses
@arthurchappell (44941)
• Preston, England
17 Nov 15
I love the mid-poem switch to her downfall here - nicely done
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@Jessicalynnt (50523)
• Centralia, Missouri
17 Nov 15
most of the lines have a good cadence, the last of the first grouping read aloud doesnt sound right though
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@RasmaSandra (97957)
• Daytona Beach, Florida
17 Nov 15
@Jessicalynnt Absolutely love the poem. Applause. 
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@kevin1877uk (36987)
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20 Nov 15
Wonderful poem, amazing wish I could do something like that.
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@kevin1877uk (36987)
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20 Nov 15
@Jessicalynnt Thank you, I have tried in the past on Bubblews.
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@Jessicalynnt (50523)
• Centralia, Missouri
20 Nov 15
start simple, you can do it! :-D
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@Hatley (163772)
• Garden Grove, California
20 Nov 15
hi@Jessicalynnt thats really a nice poem glad you saved it. I h ave not ried to get anmy of mine out yet. YOu are a poet.
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@Jessicalynnt (50523)
• Centralia, Missouri
21 Nov 15
Thanks dear! I do think I write a good poem now and then
@Tampa_girl7 (54714)
• United States
18 Nov 15
Glad you were able to save some. I haven't had any luck pulling my posts up.
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@Jessicalynnt (50523)
• Centralia, Missouri
19 Nov 15
It is a bit like that isn't it? I could see it as the beginning of a saga, well the beginning and the end, I guess someday I might have to write the middle
@koopharper (7599)
• Canada
17 Nov 15
Nice retrieval. Most of the ones I saved and the ones I lost were short comedy pieces. I don't write much poetry.
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@Jessicalynnt (50523)
• Centralia, Missouri
19 Nov 15
a poem lost is a poem I am sad over.
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@Jessicalynnt (50523)
• Centralia, Missouri
19 Nov 15
Heh, now I feel as though I will have to write the middle of this eventually
@PainsOnSlate (21845)
• Canada
17 Nov 15
That was beautiful, You are very creative. I try but nothing comes out when i want to write a poem...
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@Jessicalynnt (50523)
• Centralia, Missouri
19 Nov 15
It comes and it goes, and thank you!
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