Short Story Review: "The Half-Brothers" by Elizabeth Gaskell

@msiduri (5687)
United States
December 14, 2015 4:58pm CST
This sad story relates the tale of two half-brothers. The elder, raised by a stepfather and maternal aunt after the death of his mother, is considered “lumpish and loutish, awkward and ungainly, marring whatever he meddled in.” The younger, the narrator of the story, is the son of a well-off landowner, “the young master,” and is looked upon as someone special. The older boy, Gregory, gets sent away from school with a remark from headmaster that maybe there’s something on the farm he can handle. The younger does much better in school. There seems to be no resentment, only sadness. The boys’ father even kicks Gregory’s dog because it’s ugly and because it’s Gregory’s. There comes a time though, when the boys need each other. The dog comes through for them. All that is left is regret. A story of this sort probably will not appeal to most 21st century readers. Gregory is too passive and too accepting of his abuse and marginalization. While this sort self-effacement might have seemed admirable to 19th century readers, I think most present day readers will see him as, well, spineless. Another thing that doesn’t work well with the modern read—me, in particular—is the formatting. A good portion of the story is one, long black paragraph, page after page. _____ Title: “The Half-Brothers” Author: Elizabeth Gaskell (1810-1865) First published: 1859 The story is available here:
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@silvermist (19701)
• India
18 Dec 15
@msiduri I have not read this story.Did you like this story?
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@silvermist (19701)
• India
19 Dec 15
@msiduri That is what I thought too.But I have read some other stories by the same author which were good.I do not remember the names now.
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@msiduri (5687)
• United States
18 Dec 15
I think it was too melodramatic. It wasn't awful, but I wouldn't read it again.
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@TheHorse (238370)
• Walnut Creek, California
14 Dec 15
Never heard of this one.
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@msiduri (5687)
• United States
15 Dec 15
Not surprised. I think it's obscure and a little too maudlin for this century.
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@TheHorse (238370)
• Walnut Creek, California
15 Dec 15
@msiduri Have you heard of my favorite obscure novel, A High Wind in Jamaica, by Richard Hughes? I discovered it at our family cabin in Montana. Either my mom or dad must have liked him.
@msiduri (5687)
• United States
15 Dec 15
@TheHorse You've mentioned it. I'll have to get around to it.
@hiru84 (942)
• Malaysia
15 Dec 15
I never read a short story like this.
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@msiduri (5687)
• United States
15 Dec 15
@hiru84 It's an old story. And a sad one, too.
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@JohnRoberts (109841)
• Los Angeles, California
4 Jul 16
The writing style you described does not appeal to me.
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@msiduri (5687)
• United States
4 Jul 16
I think many people will feel that way.