Another one making rhymes

@checky99 (224)
Spain
February 29, 2016 7:01am CST
Hi MyLoters, I'd like to know if you like it and if I have made this well. I have too little vocabulary in English so I couldn't have done it better. I don't say more, despite of I think the poem is short, it espresses all I wanted. The rhymes are popular in MyLot probably cause are fun a lot, so if I can do this, why not? MyLoters wants their discussions be hot and many of them don't know how, but If you make an effort so hard you can manage all you want. A poem could be difficult, I thought but it was easy, I think it's got, I hope you were enjoyed a lot cause I should write the final dot.
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• Calgary, Alberta
29 Feb 16
This poem is rappable for some reason. All you needed it some beets and dancers.
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• India
29 Feb 16
can be really
• India
29 Feb 16
good one
@checky99 (224)
• Spain
29 Feb 16
Thanks
• India
29 Feb 16
@checky99 keep going
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@checky99 (224)
• Spain
29 Feb 16
@abhinalstrikr I isn't my specialty but I have thought about doing for now at least one more.