A tail of two kitties, by Charlie Chickens
@lookatdesktop (27156)
Dallas, Texas
April 1, 2016 7:17pm CST
Fuzzy had a sista, who had quite a cold
Each time she had sniffles, she rolled over I'm told.
Sandy's brodda was kind and polite
Each time Andy came in with lil fishys he asked for a bite.
Sleepy time came around about noonish I think.
Sandy and Fuzzy saw Andy make bubbles in the sink.
It must have been bath time again thought the two.
You think you got troubles. Its bubbles for you.
Now, this may seem kind of dumb but it was hard for me to do this.
It is not your ordinary tale. it is my attempt at writing for kiddies, who like kitties.
I used to read Dr. Seuss books way back when,
Even before I reached the old age of ten!
The Cat in the Hat was all the rage.
Just try putting that kitty into a cage.
Here I go again at rhyming and chiming
Can't say I am an expert at rope climbing.
If you wrote a children's story would it rhyme or would it matter to you? Do you give a dime?
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@DWDavis (25797)
• United States
2 Apr 16
@lookatdesktop Ah, now I get it. Rope climbing as a metaphor for working hard to attain a seemingly unreachable goal.
If that's not it, don't tell me. Just give me this one. 

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@lookatdesktop (27156)
• Dallas, Texas
2 Apr 16
@DWDavis That was the basic meaning behind it. You are as sharp as the proverbial thumb tack.
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@lookatdesktop (27156)
• Dallas, Texas
2 Apr 16
Sometimes my own metaphors throw me as I read them after a day has gone by. If there is no bling in it, well, maybe at least I for one might get some better rhyming going.
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@softbabe44 (5815)
• Vancouver, Washington
2 Apr 16
I think just doing your best putting everything you have into it would make a big difference
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@lookatdesktop (27156)
• Dallas, Texas
2 Apr 16
Give it a try and enjoy it. it's fun. It can be funny as well, the story you may tell.
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