There Was A n Old Man

@Hatley (163772)
Garden Grove, California
April 8, 2016 1:42pm CST
There was an old man from Nantucket Who sat sail in an old bucket The bucket sprang a leak The old man yelled eek And the sea done took it. One original llmerick attempt and graphic by P Hatley both copyrighted 2016
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Anne Johnston
@AnneEJ (4917)
• Dollard-Des-Ormeaux, Quebec
8 Apr 16
Like your limericks.
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Patsie Hatley
@Hatley (163772)
• Garden Grove, California
8 Apr 16
thanks I think Im begining to get the idea n ow
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Judy Story
@jstory07 (146302)
• Roseburg, Oregon
8 Apr 16
It was a very cute poem that you wrote.
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Patsie Hatley
@Hatley (163772)
• Garden Grove, California
8 Apr 16
thanks I no sre of the form but I will just keep trying
changjiangzhibin89
@changjiangzhibin89 (17056)
• China
9 Apr 16
Good limerick! Your poems always strikes my fancy .
Jekca
@Jessicalynnt (50523)
• Centralia, Missouri
9 Apr 16
gotta love a nice limerick
Patsie Hatley
@Hatley (163772)
• Garden Grove, California
9 Apr 16
thanks I had fun trying to figure that out
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Claudia Kirkland
@CRK109 (14556)
• United States
8 Apr 16
Every time I read a limerick beginning with "Nantucket", I cringe because of what I think is coming! lol You did a great job here! :)
Patsie Hatley
@Hatley (163772)
• Garden Grove, California
8 Apr 16
thanks I keep trying to do them and Im never q uite right but i will get there.
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Patsie Hatley
@Hatley (163772)
• Garden Grove, California
8 Apr 16
@CRK109 ank yo u Im learning lol
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Claudia Kirkland
@CRK109 (14556)
• United States
8 Apr 16
@Hatley oh this one was very good! :)
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