Horror Story Review: "The Vampire Maid" by Hume Nisbet

@msiduri (5687)
United States
June 30, 2016 7:10am CST
Told in the first person, this short story describes the unnamed narrator’s wandering through unspecified European locales. Weary of humanity, he seeks isolation. The cottage on the moor is just the place he’s been looking for: “I was in that condition of mind when renunciation of society was a necessity. I had become diffident myself, and weary of my kind. A strange unrest was in my blood; a barren dearth in my brains. … I wanted to be alone.” He doesn’t mind sleeping in the open, but when he comes upon the cottage, he asks for a room. The middle-aged woman living there grants him a bedroom and a sitting room. On the first night there, he misses meeting her daughter because she is under the weather. When she appears, he finds her not overly attractive, but quite arresting. She’s pale. Nevertheless, he enjoys her company on the walks he takes in the mornings to forget about his disturbing dreams. The prose is flowery and repetitive, reminiscent of the Romantic writers of earlier in the 19th century. Even so, the story is short and fun. According to Wikipedia, author Hume Nisbet was a Scottish writer, poet and painter. Many of his stories reflect time spent in Australia. He also wrote many ghost stories. The text is available at Project Gutenberg Australia. On YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xirm2-75DMg ____ Title: “The Vampire Maid” Author: Hume Nisbet (1849-1923) First published: According to ISFDB, Penzler states that this story was first published 1890 but does not list the magazine. Dracula's Guest states it was first published in Nisbet's 1900 collection Stories Weird and Wonderful. Source: ISFDB
http://gutenberg.net.au/ebooks06/0602481.txt
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@SIMPLYD (90717)
• Philippines
4 Jul 16
This seemed a very interesting story , since i like watching vampire movies . But may i know how the story ended ? I like to read books that has a happy ending , that's why .
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@SIMPLYD (90717)
• Philippines
5 Jul 16
@msiduri Thank you . I have read it already .
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@msiduri (5687)
• United States
5 Jul 16
@SIMPLYD Ah, Okay. At least I didn't spoil it for you.
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@msiduri (5687)
• United States
4 Jul 16
I'll PM you the ending, since you asked, because I hate leaving spoilers in reviews.
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@teamfreak16 (43685)
• Denver, Colorado
30 Jun 16
Despite the title, it still didn't occur to me that she was a vampire. Yeah, I can be less than observant sometimes.
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@msiduri (5687)
• United States
30 Jun 16
I would have titled it something like, "A Walk in the Woods," or "I Can't Shake the Dreams."
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@JohnRoberts (109841)
• Los Angeles, California
30 Jun 16
Always beware pale young women with a habit of "resting"!
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@msiduri (5687)
• United States
30 Jun 16
Well, it's hard to be cagey about that when the author included it in the title. The ending, however, was probably more horror for the original audience. It comes across—at least to my jaded sense of humor—as camp. I rather liked it.