Science Fiction Short Story Review: "Disqualified" by Charles L. Fontenay

@msiduri (5687)
United States
July 3, 2016 7:43am CST
Tardo and Peo have come from the Solar Council to inspect a planet that has had no contact with wider civilization since it was colonized years earlier. With aid, the planet could develop quickly. To woo them, an honored official, Saranta serves them carefully prepared steaks and some of the exotic vegetables of their world. Of utmost importance to the Council—and its agent, Tardo—is the safeguarding of human rights. Have the people resorted to slavery? What about the staff serving them this lunch—are they free? Not only free, Saranta says, they are unionized. He tells them how hard it was when they first landed. Nevertheless, the people are glad to work This finely crafted short story has a single punchline, and it is worth it. The writing is crisp. Not a word is wasted. It goes quick. This story is a lot of fun. My only complaint is that there isn’t more of it. This story is available from Project Gutenberg: __ Title: “Disqualified” Author: Charles L. Fontenay (1917-2007) First published: If September 1954 Source: ISFDB
https://www.gutenberg.org/ebooks/30251
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@miniam (9151)
• Bern, Switzerland
3 Jul 16
I have never reviewed a book, don't think l could,by the time I'm done reading, maybe i`d have forgotten the beginning especially in long books.
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@msiduri (5687)
• United States
3 Jul 16
This is a short story—a very short story. It was easy to review in that respect. It was hard to review and not give away the ending.
@msiduri (5687)
• United States
3 Jul 16
@miniam Now that Examiner has crashed and burned, I'm reviewing for fun.
@miniam (9151)
• Bern, Switzerland
3 Jul 16
@msiduri Im sure you`ll find another site that pays you to review
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4 Jul 16
I love sci-fi stuffs be it books, short stories or movies. I am an ardent follower of 365tomorrows.com where they provide you with a morsel of short science fiction story everyday for the insatiable appetite of creatures like me.
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@msiduri (5687)
• United States
4 Jul 16
Ah. Daily Science Fiction. A short story of 1500 or less (even if they turned my story down.)
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@msiduri (5687)
• United States
4 Jul 16
@The_Bong_Woman I submitted, but was rejected. *sigh* Just no accounting for taste.
4 Jul 16
@msiduri hehe you've contributed there before?
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@JohnRoberts (109841)
• Los Angeles, California
3 Jul 16
Sounds like a political metaphor story.
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@msiduri (5687)
• United States
3 Jul 16
Given the era it was written, it's steeped in UN/post-war aid thinking, but I don't see it as a metaphor. It's too absurd.
@JohnRoberts (109841)
• Los Angeles, California
3 Jul 16
@msiduri The fact it is absurd makes it the ideal political metaphor lol!
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@msiduri (5687)
• United States
3 Jul 16
@JohnRoberts Hmmm.. Point. But I didn't see it as a political metaphor. It was fun.
@teamfreak16 (43655)
• Denver, Colorado
3 Jul 16
Ah, I didn't even see it, although it was right there. I'm just not as smart as Tardo.
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@msiduri (5687)
• United States
4 Jul 16
I didn't see it either. But the moment it's mentioned—you know. One of the reasons I really liked this story.
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