The Last Bus Ride - First Death
By Steve West
@zebra2222 (5268)
United States
September 2, 2016 10:07am CST
Mary walked a little farther from the group. She was very curious. Trees with emotions. Ha, she thought. That's ridiculous. Don't touch the bark. Hmm, I think that Flavoid is making this all up. Mary inched closer to a Baroon. "What's a little old touch really going to do?" she said out loud. This is ridiculous." She took her hand and touched the bark. Instantly, the Baroon started to sway its angry branches.
"Who touched my branches?" screamed the Baroon. "Ah, it was you. Have a taste of my Blast fruit."
Mary tried to run, but the ground held her in place. She couldn't move. A large green and red fruit fell from the tree. It exploded when it touched Mary. Poof, just like that, Mary was gone. All that was left of her was two her two strapped shoes.
"What's going on?" asked Flavoid.
"She's gone," said James. "Mary is gone. Blasted away by your tree. Are you happy? Does this make your day. We want to go back to our own dimension. Take us back home."
"Foolish girl. She was warned. Now listen and pay close attention. If you don't follow my directions. If you disobey me or do something stupid, consequences can happen. Even death can occur. There are now 19 of you. Let's keep it that way. Lunch will be ready in 10 minutes. No more interruptions!"
"But," said Ron Goldman.
"No buts!" said Flavoid. "I am not going to talk to you for another 10 minutes until it is lunchtime. Go back to looking at the mirrors. That is an order."
One death. One tragedy. Will there be more? Of course there will. Lunch will be served in 10 minutes. See you tomorrow for the big meal. Also, we will see what the new bus looks like and get an idea of where they are next going to go. Expect another tragedy to occur.
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@stringer321 (5682)
• Kiryat Ata, Israel
2 Sep 16
Why Ron Goldman and not just Ron? The rest of the characters have no last name so, why does Ron have ?
I can guess you want to show that Ron likes gold, but, not all shine is gold, so, he will probably do a mistake later.
We will see if I was right or wrong.
I hope Mary will find her way back, but, your story takes me to the other dimension already, I want to read more.
Life here in reality is boring right now for me, Thanks for the story, keep writing, please.
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@zebra2222 (5268)
• United States
2 Sep 16
If you look at early postings on this story, you will see that I use last names, but only once Afterwards, I just go with first names. The main character is James, but at this point I am giving the other children equal status. Be aware that they will not all survive as this story goes along.
@stringer321 (5682)
• Kiryat Ata, Israel
2 Sep 16
@zebra2222 Do you like the Happy Tree Friends ? Each episode ends up with a lesson and they are cute creatures.
@zebra2222 (5268)
• United States
2 Sep 16
This has been an ongoing story. There will be many twists and turns as I go on.
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@Hatley (163772)
• Garden Grove, California
2 Sep 16
@zebra2222 hi I will be here reading lol
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