Horror Poem - Neanderthal Nightmare
@arthurchappell (44941)
Preston, England
October 31, 2016 3:41pm CST
@Jessicalynnt has set a special Halloween challenge for the poets among us this week, through the assistance of @JolietJake - thank you to both of you.
The five key words to inspire us are ‘dread, shrivel, banish, cackle, grave’. Here is how I used them.
Neanderthal Nightmare
Newly discovered fires die down
Leaving a sense of a dark and spacious heartbeat echoing grave
I could dare to admit my dread and move to another cave
But the others will consider me craven
They might banish me if I can’t make my demons vanish
There can be no safe haven
For a grown-up coward who cries in the night
Thinking the painted walls are alive
And the slowly dripping stalactite
Above will bite through me in my sleep
So my bones will end up added to the heap
Of sabre-tooths I helped to snare
When I was brave,
In the bright light of day.
My spear, arm’s reach away
Cannot fight the nightmare.
My nerves shrivel.
I tell myself it’s all imagination and drivel
But something raises my hackles
I see the eyes of a pair of jackals
Silent, unbetrayed by the usual cackles.
I laugh for them, as I reach for my spear
The others awaken where the sheer
Racket I make tears through the night.
I feared no ghost and this I can fight.
No coward after all – the first wild beast takes its fall
The others flee, in terror, but they do not fear me.
I turn to see the rest of the tribe are dead
One walks despite the absence of his head
Craven as it makes me, I release my scream
But nothing saves me from what is not a dream
The cave mouth crumbles – the limestone tumbles
Stalactites fall, trapping us all forever
Protecting the oh so clever
Taller tribes who avoided these caves
Our sudden downfall saves
Them so I hope they treat their world well
While we perish in this undeserved infernal Hell.
Now the bats fly and the jackals laugh at last
As our hope, our time is passed
I wonder what we might have done in distant years
My people close in. I embrace our fate, and shed no more tears.
Arthur Chappell
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@Jessicalynnt (50523)
• Centralia, Missouri
1 Nov 16
oh I got chills, very well done!
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