Haiku 5th November 2016
@arthurchappell (45002)
Preston, England
November 5, 2016 2:20pm CST
1/.
Next bucket list wish
Finishing this Haiku off
Oops too late this ti….
2/.
Volcano feelings
Erupting anger within
Must I go to school?
3/.
Red danger warning sign
Silences conversation
As I approach friends
4/.
What if the Moon popped
Like a balloon when Armstrong
Pricked it with his flag?
5/.
Caught on his first stab
The serial killer cries
Let me try again.
Arthur Chappell
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@crossbones27 (48542)
• Mojave, California
5 Nov 16
I always love these because it makes you want to read them 20 times to see what they mean.
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@arthurchappell (45002)
• Preston, England
5 Nov 16
they can get very cryptic and multi-meaning
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@crossbones27 (48542)
• Mojave, California
5 Nov 16
@arthurchappell Why I get mad at people who always want lengthy posts and probably my reason why I love punk music so much. When done right you can put a lot of punch in a few words. That is a challenge in itself!
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@arthurchappell (45002)
• Preston, England
5 Nov 16
yes why call a horse a horse when you can call it an equine quadrapedal mammal @crossbones27
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@Jessicalynnt (50525)
• Centralia, Missouri
7 Nov 16
that first one, haha! funny!
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@RasmaSandra (74074)
• Daytona Beach, Florida
5 Nov 16
Enjoyed your haikus. This might not be a haiku but let's see - voting time is near, grab all who are dear, run and hide for the time you fear is now here.
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@arthurchappell (45002)
• Preston, England
6 Nov 16
@RasmaSandra though the rhyming means it isn't haiku it is a fine line of verse in its own right
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