Jack be Nimble (Fractured Poem)

@zebra2222 (5268)
United States
November 20, 2016 9:05pm CST
Jack be nimble, But not for long. Something was Very, very wrong. Jack twisted His leg. Oh what pain. Jack fell down In the rain. Jack started Coughing. His cold came on quick. Poor Jack Was feeling very sick. Jack got assistance From his pal Nick The roads were getting Very slick. The electricity went out. Jack asked for Nick To grab hold of a Candle stick. Jack went into his bed, Swollen leg and all. He took out his phone And made a call. "Hi mom, I'm sick And my leg is in pain. Could you bring me some Soup in the rain?' His mom brought some soup. Jack smiled and ate. Mom went home saying, "it's very late." In the morning, Jack's pain Was much, much better. And so in turn Was the sunny weather. The electricity came back. The candle stick shrunk down. Jack called Nick And made a happy sound. "Thank you Nick. You are my best friend." With that Jack ate breakfast, And his cold did end. All is well. Jack is quick once more. Hope you looked this tale And didn't find it a bore.
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@Happy2BeMe (99353)
• Canada
21 Nov 16
lol I twist for Jack. I enjoyed it a great deal.
@zebra2222 (5268)
• United States
21 Nov 16
Had lots of fun writing this.
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@Happy2BeMe (99353)
• Canada
21 Nov 16
@zebra2222 I can tell
@Hatley (163772)
• Garden Grove, California
21 Nov 16
lol I liked it v ery muich
@zebra2222 (5268)
• United States
21 Nov 16
Glad that you liked it.