Mary Had a Little Lamb (#3)

@zebra2222 (5268)
United States
February 1, 2017 4:09pm CST
Mary had a little lamb. She wanted a dog instead. She got tired of the ba, ba, ba, And sold the lamb to Fred. Mary then purchased a dog. She brought it into her home. The dog smiled at dear sweet Mary And said, "My name's Jerome." "You're really cool," said the dog. "I'm going to like it here." Mary couldn't believe her ears. "You can talk?" "Oh yes, quite clear." Mary offered Jerome some tea. Jerome said, "That sounds fine. I'm glad that you purchased me. You're my favorite Valentine." Mary was so happy. "I have a dog that can actually speak." From that day forward, Mary was brave. She no longer was insecure and weak.
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@diosabella (4789)
2 Feb 17
I find it very refreshing and funny. I hope you make more. Very amusing and the rhyme was pretty good too. I wish I could like something like this too.
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@zebra2222 (5268)
• United States
2 Feb 17
i have done this for sometime. I find it to be fun. Glad you enjoyed it.
2 Feb 17
@zebra2222 The kids now a days will enjoy your version more than the original.
@Happy2BeMe (99353)
• Canada
1 Feb 17
Awesome poem.
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@zebra2222 (5268)
• United States
1 Feb 17
Thank's for the compliment.
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@Happy2BeMe (99353)
• Canada
1 Feb 17
@zebra2222 you are welcome
@KristenH (33591)
• Cuyahoga Falls, Ohio
1 Feb 17
Very cute poem. Nicely done.
@zebra2222 (5268)
• United States
2 Feb 17
I enjoy rewriting nursery rhymes.
@zebra2222 (5268)
• United States
2 Feb 17
I appreciate the compliment.
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@KristenH (33591)
• Cuyahoga Falls, Ohio
2 Feb 17
@zebra2222 Anytime.
@franxav (14597)
• India
2 Feb 17
Sometimes I think, it'd good to publish all your "new rhymes" in a book.
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@zebra2222 (5268)
• United States
2 Feb 17
I have written many new rhymes for years. Unfortunately, I have never save them. Glad you like them.