My First Pop Song

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This is my first song, I made it a while ago. The vocal melodies are by me. I also came up with a somehow cliché lyrics just like most of the pop songs :D. The instrumental beat is by Feelo (YouTube channel). Please give it a listen and tell me what you think of it. I'm waiting for your comments! (Scroll down for the link) Lyrics: (1st verse) Oh when I remember the past How I miss, our, little times, And I reminisce old memories, When we were together, When things were better (Pre-chorus) But now you're gone (x2) (Chorus) And now I'm lyin' here Alone, cryin', How I miss you ohoo-ohoo Uhaaa... (2nd verse) Oh when I recall your face, My heart gets filled with pain, Oh how I pine for the old days When we were together, When I was so happier (Pre-chorus) But now you're gone (x2) (Chorus) And now, I'm lyin' here Alone, cryin', How I miss you ohoo-ohoo [...] (Bridge) I'm dyin' slowly oh, I'm feelin' dead Inside, I'm bein' so consumed babe (Chorus) And now, I'm lyin' here Alone, cryin', How I miss you ohoo Uhaaa... Here it is: