Can You Suggest A Title For My Poem?
By chicnthin
@chicnthin (3030)
Philippines
July 6, 2018 6:31am CST
visions were blurry
cause by delusional mind
all are to worry
but doesn't seem to mind
aiming high
illusions flew
insecurities strike
inner bleed
keep on repeating
same fake acting
still immaturely pretending
thoughts seems no ending
in love, we're thirsty
words were dirty
in life, where full of difficulty
actions were depravity
blinded by wants
demanding too much
was never satisfiedÂ
never been contented
Saw this on my notepad, I think I made this last year out of boredom. It wasn't that great but the thought I'm able to express through this means a lot to me. It doesn't have a title yet, what would you suggest?
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8 responses
@Jessabuma (31696)
• Baguio, Philippines
6 Jul 18
How about "Challenges of life"?
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@chicnthin (3030)
• Philippines
6 Jul 18
I see thanks for suggesting, i think little thoughts is good

@JustBhem (70555)
• Davao, Philippines
6 Jul 18
@chicnthin
Well, since it's your poem, you end up having yours anyway.
@chicnthin (3030)
• Philippines
6 Jul 18
Thanks for suggestion so far im not fully decided.
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@chicnthin (3030)
• Philippines
6 Jul 18
Thanks for suggestion so far im not fully decided.
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@chicnthin (3030)
• Philippines
6 Jul 18
That is good. It is perfect for the content
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