Nature Boy / myLot

Philippines

October 26, 2018 8:47pm CST

I've just got back from writing poems so excuse me in advance if its a little bit sloppy. Hope it would improve along the way. This poem is entitled nature boy, I just want to associate nature from my feelings right now so I've started doing this. As I walked along the beach Birds chirping in the tree State of calmness have been breach Welcomed by the cool wind in the sea Coconut tress are waving Series of waves in the shore crashing Far from loud noises and screeching Far from motorcyle's engine revving Winds whistling in my ears Calling me while it touches my skin Mind is now clear Distorted vision is now a little keen Strange darks clouds are going away Trembling fears and sadness leading me astray Ray of light showing me the path Making sure i'd stay always in track.

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5 responses

Arunima Singh

@arunima25 (93194)

• Bangalore, India

27 Oct 18

I liked your poem. I felt as if I was walking on the beach. I wish I could but I have no access to beach here.

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dave

@dave121495 (1294)

• Philippines

27 Oct 18

You need to visit the beach for quite some time.

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Xavier Bage

@franxav (14592)

• India

27 Oct 18

I just wrote a poem too and published it in my blog. Loved your poem.

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dave

@dave121495 (1294)

• Philippines

27 Oct 18

Thanks :) Can you send me a link please? Hope I could learn from your poem too.

Angel

@nanayangel (7877)

• Philippines

27 Oct 18

Hi there Dave! Thank you for sharing your poem with us. I think that it's not sloppy at all and acknowledging that this is not your best poem just shows how good you are as a poet. I love the way you described everything and of course, with nature as the springboard of creative description, you are sure to evoke the familiar, calming effect on the readers just how it made me long for some quiet time at the beach once again.

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@dave121495 (1294)

• Philippines

27 Oct 18

Oh the flattery, but thanks for complimenting :). Still i'm mediocre in doing poems hope that I could get good in doing this. I'm still grasping for words.