Stranger at the Gate (a ghazal poem)

Ireland
November 3, 2018 9:10am CST
Stranger at the Gate Who cares about the stranger at the gate? I do not know. The poor orphan, abandoned to his fate? I do not know. Where once I had the answers, now my mind is full of doubt; how do these certainties depreciate? I do not know. From noon till night our ardent looks would scandalise the town; why is it that your eyes are filled with hate? I do not know. It used to be that man respected man for what he did; these days are we just numbers on a slate? I do not know. The wisdom of the years is something valued now by none; the butt of standing jokes, this balding pate? I do not know. The saqi turns his back; how many skins will be required, oh my love, this unholy thirst to sate? I do not know. Once upon a time Amir was counted a believer; to every question now I simply state, I do not know. ------------------------------------------------------------------ The poem above is a ghazal, a medieval Persian form of Arabic origin. I wrote it some nine years ago for a Wikihow article, releasing it to Creative Commons, and it has been used extensively as a sample of the form since. Here’s the article, in case you’re interested in tackling the form (It's fun and not particularly difficult):
The Ghazal is a centuries-old, popular form of poem and song in Persia (Iran), Pakistan and India.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ghazal It can be an interesting challenge, but fun, too. A ghazal consists of a series of couplets (two-line...
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@kumbarn14 (735)
• Pakistan
3 Nov 18
People who measures people are always unhappy people. On the other hand people who love people welcomes them with a smile and is always a happy person immaterial poor or rich, or any religion. You talk something good - todays crowd find it boring. It just make me feel happy to read your poem and reminds me of the past beautiful things. One day, I had an old beggar woman who waited for me at the security gate. She walked with me to my house for lunch. My granny tells my mother, there like her father she has also brought you a visitor. I was happy, gave her lunch, money and hugged her and said now you can please go..
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• Ireland
3 Nov 18
Well said, @kumbarn14. I have travelled among the poorest countries in the world, in West Africa, and saw so many welcoming smiles. The poorest people, happy to share what little they had, and they were serene.
@cherigucchi (14879)
• Philippines
3 Nov 18
I love poetry of any kind. Nice work of ART!
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• Ireland
4 Nov 18
Thank you, Cheri. I can't lay claim to the artwork though - it's from an 1899 cartoon!
• Preston, England
3 Nov 18
lovely poem - not heard of this verse form before. I may well try to write some
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• Ireland
3 Nov 18
Thank you, Arthur. And I like your positive attitude
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@Icydoll (36717)
• India
3 Nov 18
Very lovely poem
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• Ireland
4 Nov 18
Thank you very much, Icy
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@Courage7 (19633)
• United States
4 Nov 18
Lovely Norman you clever fellow thanks.
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@Courage7 (19633)
• United States
4 Nov 18
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• Ireland
4 Nov 18
Haha, thank you Courage
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@CarolDM (203454)
• Nashville, Tennessee
3 Nov 18
A man of many talents my friend. This is incredible.
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@CarolDM (203454)
• Nashville, Tennessee
4 Nov 18
@NormanDarlo Just soaking the truth as I see it.
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• Ireland
4 Nov 18
Many thanks, Carol. You are always so encouraging
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• Ireland
4 Nov 18
@CarolDM Thanks, really
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