Words have power
By sofs
@sofssu (23660)
November 23, 2018 4:02am CST
Words have power, believe it or not. You speak your future into existence. What you speak is what you set yourself up for.. There have been various experiments conducted on rice and apples to prove this. Speak faith, speak love, speak hope.. This poem was written after right after I read an email from a friend... it made me utterly sad..
Words light up,
On the screen,
Capitalized,
Screaming,
Tormenting,
Flooded with fear,
Inundated with anxiety,
Screaming in pain,
Tomorrows seem distant,
At this moment,
Just agony remains,
The sole refrain of the mind,
Blinded to hope,
Optimism denied,.
Expectant,
Of gloom,
Engrossed in the pain of today,
Lost to the endless possibilities,
Of life in the future.
The mind has affirmed,
Defeat, despair and hopelessness,
There is no way now,
But to follow,
What has been declared,
By the words,
Lit up on the screen!
sofspoetry
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11 responses
@LovingMyBabies (85923)
• Valdosta, Georgia
23 Nov 18
I absolutely agree with you as you know. I have seen the studies done on what it does to fruit and such when someone spoke life and positive words to it. It's amazing.
I loved your poem and it's so very true-some convince themselves of only the negative in life. Here's why:
THEY ARE TOO FOCUSED ON THEIR OWN TROUBLES AND SITUATION. I can say that because I have been there years ago!
Changing the focus changes everything!
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@LovingMyBabies (85923)
• Valdosta, Georgia
23 Nov 18
@sofssu Don't be mad at them though, they need to be shown love. They just don't know who they truly are and how much they are loved by God. It's not their fault, they need to be SHOWN-not told. =)
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@sofssu (23660)
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23 Nov 18
@LovingMyBabies No, I am not mad just sad that they don't see the truth.. Yeah , they really do not understand how much they are loved.
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@sofssu (23660)
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23 Nov 18
@LovingMyBabies Agree with you completely, most people who are miserable di this to themselves, they shut hope out, give no room for optimism, the doom themselves to all things negative. You are spot on.. change your thought and change your life. Thanks a ton.
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@Mavic123456 (21891)
• Thailand
23 Nov 18
wow very poetic eh. anyway I want to mention about your cactus again. LOL
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@sofssu (23660)
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23 Nov 18
@Mavic123456 lol.. thank you.. . so the cactus again.. wait till i post some more pictures, then you can have your say...
just kidding.
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@Mavic123456 (21891)
• Thailand
24 Nov 18
@sofssu yes, I am already drooling on your cactus and I want to buy cactus here as well.
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@sofssu (23660)
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26 Nov 18
@Mavic123456 If you do will you please post pictures here.. I'd like to see what new or rare ones you have in Thailand.
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@ilocosboy (45155)
• Philippines
23 Nov 18
Strong, not just the words but the emotions flows into it.
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@sofssu (23660)
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23 Nov 18
@ilocosboy Yes, I kind of didn't wait to edit it..had to get it off my chest.. for a bit before I spoke to her.
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@allknowing (153529)
• India
23 Nov 18
This is the first time I have come across poetry written in this form What is this format known as?
A lot of thought has gone into this I can see

@allknowing (153529)
• India
24 Nov 18
@sofssu I write poetry too but it has the regular form.
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@sofssu (23660)
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24 Nov 18
@allknowing This is free form.. no restraints at all .. Its only the in the last one year or so I have started writing in this form, usually I write poetry that follows forms and meter. This is fun.. when you get the hang of it.. you should try it sometime if you are so inclined.
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@sofssu (23660)
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24 Nov 18
@allknowing Try it it isn't easy as it looks if you are used to form and meter.. but you will get used to it.
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@antonbunot (11146)
• Calgary, Alberta
23 Nov 18
Not all words coming out from our mouths have power. Example: Words coming out from the cute mouth of Prez Donald Trump are powerless! Liberals/democrats.MSM ignore them . . like that CNN guy named Jimmie Acosta . . LOL
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@sofssu (23660)
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23 Nov 18
@antonbunot Maybe its too soon to comment.. we'll wait and watch..it takes time to see the effects. Not that i care too much about Trump anyways.















