First work shared,opinions?
By Nancy Luther
@Nankuhh2001 (24)
    January 18, 2019 5:44pm CST
                         
            I'm sorry for what I've done 
These games just don't seem fun 
 look around and see everything 
oh my god what have I done 
my heart beats faster 
Tearing every thought after,
Each tear drips into a crystal chalice,
Each much prettier then her
This space Fills and I run away like Alice 
Chasing a pointless thing like a picture palace 
All these monsters I see shall I turn away with a bend of the knee and curtesy or will this be the last thing I ever see
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         @didinedhia (8482)
 • Algeria
                    21 Jan 19
                    wow , im impressed , thank you so much , give us more
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@didinedhia (8482)
 • Algeria
                            22 Jan 19
                                    
                            @Nankuhh2001 thank you , but you should right a book (poems book)
and sell it
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