Too Much Now
@simplfred (20608)
Philippines
January 23, 2019 8:29pm CST
Too much now...
The hardship of this so called life
Every prices of commodities is going up
The only thing that I can see going down
Is my self...
Too much now
People are telling lies
Just to get some money
The only thing that’s telling the truth
Is my stomach aches...
Too much now...
We work really hard
And compensated so little
The only thing that is big
Is my loan...
After thinking
About this too much stuff
I think,
I still have something
To thank about
The sun still shining…
Thanks for reading,
Sorry it is a rubbish piece. I can't do a good or concentrate for a good poem now because of a lot of issues especially time management.
Have a great day Guys!
Mysterious Aries
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11 responses
@Jeanne_KaSaHa (345)
• Indonesia
24 Jan 19
I think it's not rubbish. It was good with a fun reasoning. I like it. Have a great day too!
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@simplfred (20608)
• Philippines
24 Jan 19
Thank you, I think it is a very simple poem. My old poems are very complicated and my wordings used to be deep.
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@Jeanne_KaSaHa (345)
• Indonesia
24 Jan 19
@simplfred And maybe if you post your old poem where it was that complicated, I wouldn't be able to understand it. 
Sometimes simple is the best. I can't really make a good poem either. I just used simple words to describe it.
Sometimes simple is the best. I can't really make a good poem either. I just used simple words to describe it.1 person likes this
@simplfred (20608)
• Philippines
24 Jan 19
@Jeanne_KaSaHa Oh I see, I'm glad that you write poetry as well. Are you posting them here?
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@simplfred (20608)
• Philippines
24 Jan 19
I'm glad you like it, my friend. Thank you.
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@RasmaSandra (73365)
• Daytona Beach, Florida
24 Jan 19
Not a bad poem at all you get your point across very well.
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@simplfred (20608)
• Philippines
24 Jan 19
I'm glad to know, my friend. I used to write a more complicated poem now it is quite simple.
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@amitkokiladitya (171936)
• Agra, India
24 Jan 19
You have penned down the reality so well
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@simplfred (20608)
• Philippines
24 Jan 19
Yeah, we can deny it's existence in every corner of the world.
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@amitkokiladitya (171936)
• Agra, India
24 Jan 19
@simplfred yes..the true reality of our life
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@simplfred (20608)
• Philippines
24 Jan 19
Thank you so much for the compliment, my friend.
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@simplfred (20608)
• Philippines
24 Jan 19
@WiseGhots Yeah, I plan to post more of my old poem as time goes by.
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@WiseGhots (14607)
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24 Jan 19
@simplfred You're welcome.
I hope to read more later.
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@fransmonlot (411)
• United States
24 Jan 19
Hello!
It was not rubbish I quite enjoyed it. Additionally, there is some truth in some of the things you say prices are increasing. Thanks for sharing!
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@fransmonlot (411)
• United States
25 Jan 19
@simplfred You're very welcome, have a nice day.
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@simplfred (20608)
• Philippines
24 Jan 19
That prices, indeed. Thank you for the read.
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@simplfred (20608)
• Philippines
24 Jan 19
Thank you for this beautiful verse. I need it right now.
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@simplfred (20608)
• Philippines
24 Jan 19
@Janet357 Yeah, I could only but hope, my friend. Thanks.
