REALIZATION

@simplfred (20641)
Philippines
January 30, 2019 5:05am CST
At last, Realization came to him A sudden blast Enlighten what's dim Now, he knows what to do Must forgive and forget Truth must not skew Else a ton of regret What happened He never thinks of such wisdom before Because the pure white he used to blacken He enjoyed the face of others down on the floor Now he feels lighter Ready to seeds good deeds A color of cotton or even whiter Will response help to those in needs No more heavy metal song Just soft and sentimental one It's time to correct what's wrong To hear the words "Well done" He saw a man fall down The song he sang is fresh Suddenly he realized the sound That he was no more in the flesh... March 16, 2017 Mysterious Aries / Simplfred The main message of the poem is that we must do good things while we are still living. We must say "I love you" to those we love, right now that we can still say it to them. We must share our blessing to others while we have the opportunity. I just hope you'll enjoy the message of the poem. Thanks.
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@ZedSmart (19839)
• Philippines
30 Jan 19
Nice one there. Now I know that you're a poet.
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
30 Jan 19
Thank you so much, my friend.
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@Sreekala (34312)
• India
30 Jan 19
All of us are busy and forget to say those wonderful words to our dear ones.
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
30 Jan 19
I know we have time but someitmes we think it is better to show it than said. I admit, I can't remember the last time I've said I love you especially to my parents.
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